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Fun Fic Friday!

Oct 28, 2011 17:17

~Fun Fic Friday~

TGIF! It's the day before the weekend, and what better way to close out a long week than with a fun dose of ficlets and drabbles of Luke, Reid, or Luke & Reid? Or how about some amazing icons or graphics of the guys? (Don't be fooled by the name - Fun (Graph)Fic Friday just didn't have the same ring to it.) Here's your chance to ( Read more... )

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I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 29 2011, 05:35:34 UTC

I take a step forward and lower my voice. His anger has passed and in its place is fear and desire. He begins to shake from nervousness but does not back away. I reach out to touch him, to calm him, but all I see are his lips. They’re red and full and slightly parted. His breath is coming in pants drying what I seek to touch. He flicks his tongue out wetting those lips and swallows. All my restraint is gone. I want to kiss him and taste him. I want to calm his fear and quench his desire and mine ( ... )

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV sleeper6 October 29 2011, 08:11:30 UTC

This is fabulous! I really think you conveyed Reid's thoughts so well. He really did need more.

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 30 2011, 04:49:34 UTC

Thank you. It was a completely different writing in 1st person and present tense. I wasn't too sure about it. I'm glad you liked it...and we all needed more.

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV scotianova October 29 2011, 08:53:09 UTC

And I need more from THIS!

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 30 2011, 04:51:23 UTC

Thank you so much, I needed so much more too.

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV marsabi October 29 2011, 12:04:51 UTC

Aww, Reid! We all wanted more, lol! Great job expressing Reid's need here

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 30 2011, 04:52:57 UTC

Isn't that the truth, we all wanted so much more. Thank you for the compliment. I wasn't sure how it would go over in first person.

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV joann414 October 29 2011, 13:46:39 UTC

Perfect imagery of REid's thoughts in this scene. Love this

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 30 2011, 04:53:47 UTC

Thank you. I've done exhaustive hours of research on that scene lol.

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV pabwecg October 29 2011, 19:20:52 UTC

VERY nicely done. Thanks!

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 30 2011, 04:54:23 UTC

Thank you :D

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV moerlin October 29 2011, 20:00:41 UTC

They totally both needed more! Damn Luke's brain for kicking in. :(

He flicks his tongue out wetting those lips and swallows.

This is possibly my favorite part of the kiss scene, so I'm glad your Reid noticed this as well. ;)

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 30 2011, 04:57:53 UTC

Hours of video research :D

We all needed a heck of a lot more. Now to a Star Wars quote. "Trust your feelings, Luke. Let go." Where the hell was Obi Wan during this scene.

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV dpracket October 29 2011, 21:08:06 UTC

Holy cow...*I* need more. Lol.

Whew. I think that was hotter than actually seeing it on TV. Great job.

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV kccalgal October 30 2011, 04:59:47 UTC

Thank you. Hours of video research made it possible. Maybe I can come up with Luke's thoughts on baby rattle day and of course change the ending. :D

Re: I need more -- LuRe 2/3 kiss from Reid's POV dpracket October 30 2011, 12:42:25 UTC

Baby rattle day! Yes. :)

And I never tire of fix its for that stupid ending.

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