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sleeper6 July 10 2012, 22:34:03 UTC
“So you and Richie Rich made up, huh?” Reid asks as he steps into the exam room, where Noah sits patiently on the table.

“Who?”

Reid opens his mouth to answer but shuts it quickly instead. He wants to keep that nickname between him and Luke. “You and Mr. Snyder. The two of you sure weren’t shaking hands when saying your goodbyes.”

Noah smiles. “We weren’t really fighting.”

“But you weren’t really getting along, either, not since he found out that I was taking you to Dallas.” Reid takes out his penlight.

“Can you blame him?” Noah says loudly, catching Reid by surprise.

Is he finally defending Luke? Reid ponders ( ... )

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kccalgal July 11 2012, 00:35:52 UTC
Sleeper this is wonderful. You did a great job of capturing their characters. I swore I heard Van, Eric, and Jake talking in my ear while reading this.

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sleeper6 July 11 2012, 13:39:02 UTC
Thank you! What a compliment!

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moerlin July 11 2012, 01:01:48 UTC
I love me some powerless Reid. ♥ It's very entertaining to "watch", thanks for wonderfully adding to the scene!

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sleeper6 July 11 2012, 13:43:18 UTC
Thank you!

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nancygrew July 11 2012, 02:02:35 UTC
This is fantastic. Nice characterization for everyone!

It's interesting that the show was pretty consistent with Noah being 'everything' to Luke and Noah always being the one trying to escape the relationship. They never seemed to make the relationship 'even'. The most heart-felt declaration I can remember from Noah [and I realize this is in hindsight] is the "i always imagined that you'd be coming to Los Angeles with me" speech. Not that the scene was particular heart-felt.

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sleeper6 July 11 2012, 13:44:03 UTC
Sadly, I never believed that Noah was as invested in the relationship as Luke was. Thanks for the comment!

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dpracket July 11 2012, 11:05:00 UTC
He wants to keep that nickname between him and Luke.

This made me smile.

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sleeper6 July 11 2012, 13:37:32 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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hilja83 July 11 2012, 17:52:09 UTC
YAY your writting a story!!!! Love it.

Really Noah?! Urgh Douche back.

Great start of a new fic!!!!!!!

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sleeper6 July 11 2012, 21:14:41 UTC
Thanks for reading! But no, unfortunately, this isn't a new fic. I'm writing one right but this ain't it. I hope to post it soon; it's a short one, though, 2 or 3 chapters only. :)

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limeybird2 July 11 2012, 22:56:09 UTC
i always felt like Noah felt like he owned Luke & Luke would always do what he told him to do. he had him trained that if he didn't do what he wanted he would punish Luke by withholding any affection from him & break up with him until he was satisfied that Luke had learned his lesson & he would then take him back. Poor Luke never had another choice of someone else to know that that's not how a healthy relationship should go until he met Reid.

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kccalgal July 12 2012, 03:20:04 UTC
I am putting up chapter 1 tomorrow. You MUST read it. This sounds exactly like my Noah.

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ltklo July 13 2012, 11:51:30 UTC
Fun!

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sleeper6 July 14 2012, 16:26:32 UTC
Thanks!

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