Fun Fic Friday

Oct 05, 2012 09:18

~Fun Fic Friday~

TGIF! It's the day before the weekend, and what better way to close out a long week than with a fun dose of ficlets and drabbles of Luke & Reid? Or how about some amazing icons or graphics of the guys? Don't be fooled by the name - Fun (Graph)Fic Friday just didn't have the same ring to it. Here's your chance to contribute a short ( Read more... )

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lurelei October 6 2012, 09:12:54 UTC
Rumour has it... He's the one I'm leaving you for.

Squinty eyes meet open dark pools. Clenched fists fall hopelessly at sides. Open hands try not to reach out.

He has to stand firm now. There can be no mistake about the message he got out.

Frustrated rage is blurted out in his face. He understands. But is not about to do something to make this better.

"It is not about him, Noah. It is about you. It is about me. You're the one I'm leaving you for. I am the one I'm leaving you for."

A back is turned at him. A towel wipes a counter. Coffeecups collide.
Luke stands up and leaves the scene.

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amyafa October 6 2012, 09:26:56 UTC
Great story. I love Luke's line. You're tho one I'm leaving you for.

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lurelei October 6 2012, 17:58:18 UTC
Thank you! If only Noah can get it through his thick skull...

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sleeper6 October 6 2012, 13:03:47 UTC
This is great! Short but to the point. Maybe Noah can finally understand.

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lurelei October 6 2012, 17:59:50 UTC
Thanks. Yeah, with me it's either short or endless babbling... so I choose short ;)
I'm not sure Noah will ever understand, but when I'm in a good mood I'm willing to give him the benefit of the doubt!

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dpracket October 6 2012, 14:52:16 UTC
"I am the one I'm leaving you for" PERFECT LINE!!!!

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lurelei October 6 2012, 18:00:37 UTC
Hee, thank you! And glad you think so. I actually added it after I posted - because without it, it all sounded still too dependent to me.

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fan_tan October 6 2012, 15:27:23 UTC
So emotional! I like to see Luke standing up for himself for once. Awesome!

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lurelei October 6 2012, 18:01:00 UTC
Thank you very much! I like a strong Luke - very much :)

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kccalgal October 6 2012, 17:02:42 UTC
"I am the one I'm leaving you for."

Great line and great take on the prompt!

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lurelei October 6 2012, 18:01:31 UTC
:) Thank you so much! For me, it's important Luke feels strong and good about himself.

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scotianova October 6 2012, 19:49:51 UTC
Well I had a workshop today and am totally talked out...but I still can get out this:
WOW!

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lurelei October 6 2012, 20:02:32 UTC
Hehe, wow is good, right? :D
Dankjewel <3

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scotianova October 6 2012, 20:29:12 UTC
Exactly! I've told you- I like your trenchant way to write (... and think...)

:)))
Your ficlet just elicited a little piece out of me...

P.S. Finished Farouche this week - it's only waiting for revision.

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smoothlikebutta October 7 2012, 14:49:00 UTC
I am the one I'm leaving you for.

Perfect!

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lurelei October 7 2012, 20:27:05 UTC
Because he's worth it!

Thank you!

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