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Sticks and Stones 2/2

Oct 30, 2011 23:53

Title:Sticks and Stones
Author:Marsabi
Rating:NC-17
Warning: Sex, Hurt/Comfort

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tldreamer October 31 2011, 11:20:25 UTC

What a great ride! So glad Chandler was caught right away and that Luke got there in time! And OMG! What a terrible patient Reid is!! And that !!~(@(*##*#& Noah!! I really enjoyed this.

marsabi October 31 2011, 15:45:00 UTC

Lol! Yeah, I really wanted this to be a one-shot (otherwise, I might have let some more time pass with Chandler holding Reid, but then I would never get it done by Halloween!). I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Yay!

kccalgal October 31 2011, 15:44:12 UTC

Wow! That was a lot of action for a two part story! The sex was incredibly hot. Chandler was a complete nut job, and yes I think Noah was behind most of it. I love the idea that Reid will keep his scar and not let any hack touch his body. Fantastic story.

marsabi October 31 2011, 16:25:46 UTC

Thanks so much for reading! I'm so glad you liked the part with Reid keeping the scar.

smoothlikebutta November 1 2011, 02:00:11 UTC

“Your body has other flaws. For instance, you can’t seem to ever grow a beard, yet have an abundance of chest hair. You have dimples, which really belong to a six year old. Your second toe on your left foot is bigger than your first. You never tan, and don’t even get me started on your hair.” Reid smiled at him quickly, and then grunted at the impact as Luke launched his body into Reid’s arms.

“Love you,” Luke said into Reid’s neck.

So cute! I loved this passage. I love how Reid appreciates everything about Luke, imperfections and all.

Reid puts his hand over Luke’s. “We always do.”

Aww!

“Thanks,” Luke whispers. “For that and for letting me take care of you all week too. I really needed to do it.”

“I know that,” Reid says, stroking his hair.

They are just so perfect together. I loved this story! Thank you for sharing it with us. :D

marsabi November 1 2011, 02:56:57 UTC

Thanks so much! I really wanted to show that Reid loves Luke, flaws and all, and doesn't want or need him to be perfect. I like the idea that they can trust each other both sexually and emotionally too.

Thanks again!

sleeper6 November 2 2011, 00:34:58 UTC

Suspenseful but very enjoyable too!

marsabi November 2 2011, 02:44:50 UTC

Thanks!