LILITH: 'Welcome' 1/2 - Episode 5 [Uruha x Ruki]

[lust_fragrance]

Title: LILITH 
Chapter: ' Welcome '  part 1
Author: Miyo T. (aka. lust_fragrance )
Beta: gazerawker
Genre:  super-natural, smut, humor, angst, gore
Warnings: malexmale, smut, fluff, bad english , SLOW updates, demons, seme Uruha
Rating: R

Comments

[gazerawker]

aaand now i can write my stupid comment 8D

as usual, i reaaallyy like the description in this- the description of uruha's uncertainty, ruki's curiosity and of course everything in general. most of all i love the description of ruki's change; how his senses are now stronger and more emphasised.

Slowly but surely he was changing into a demon; not only the eyes showed that, but also the new, adapted to a much hostile environment wits: voices and unknown sounds resounded in his ears like they stood one inch from him, unnoticeable details now more visible than he ever thought they could be, smells also pregnant and pointy, itching his sensitive nose with every small change of wind, everything was emphasised one hundred times stronger.

this is just. <333333333

but the ending.. oh, you are harsh. my head was going 'bitchbitchbitchbitchWHYYY' when i read it.. so naturally i'm very curious as to what is going to happen; both ruki's general thoughts on this change and what uruha is going to do.

hm, so. yeah. 8D

<3

[lust_fragrance]

lol will you ever not be the first haha, ilu

Thanks, and really? I actually thought I didn`t put enough accent on their minds and personalities overall. I`m very happy nevertheless 8D /hug

Don`t worry about that; i already have the idea planned so it`ll only take some time to type it down : > (shouldn`t take TOO much )

Anyway, TY sugarpie :3

[chibiroxas17]

I was hugging my pillow in anxiety while reading this and
when I got to the end I almost tore it apart while going : "GOD WHY!?!?"

This story is just so addicting,how youre able to make is so sensual~

“...Ruki, please...” That was the last drop for Ruki at that moment. " - *had spasms*

MUST.HAVE.MORE! <3

[lust_fragrance]

awwww sorry
:C

But I`m well known for my teasing habits :" >

And thank you, I appreciate these dainty comments more than someone can imagine haha, hence I`ll continue writing - no doubt

[cursedhurricane]

WHAT'S WITH THIS END? o___o NOOOOOOES.
Well, waiting patiently for the next chapter.

I liked the whole unreal atmosphere, Ruki's transformation, the way Uruha tempted him ♥ What a devilish Uruha, I love him...He's so mysterious and at the same time, behind his demoniac side, we can feel the human. And weirdly I think the human side felt pretty "alone" as a demon, and surely that's why Uruha wanted Ruki to be like him.

*rambling nonsense* Looking forward the next one! ♥

[lust_fragrance]

I`M CRUEL, BEWARE

lol you really got into the story...
Yes, Uruha has some humanity left in him from when he was a human - but for Ruki... i Have bigger plans

ah actually, i enjoy reading long comments more than you imagine lmao. even though it`s hard to reply them with a proper comment : \

thanks and cheers

[kawa_ii_neko]

wah!!!!!1so exciting!!
my heart's pounding!>w

[lust_fragrance]

just...don`t have a heart attack or something ok?...

and thanks

[rukisleech]

MAN!!! I want more!!!! D:

This is getting so sensual!!!
Like the ending... I nearly jizzed myself! o__o
Can't wait for the next part...

[lust_fragrance]

You`ll have, don`t worry. I actually have another chapter started too, but firstly i need to finish the second part of this chapter.

I thought this fic needed some suspense HA , so please don`t hate me, ok?

thank you for reading/taking the time to feed my craving for comments