WIP - Wings and Tail - Chapter 2/15 - H\D NC-17

[luttie]

Well, here is the second chapter of Winds and tail. hope you'll enjoy it ^__^

title: Wings and tail.
Disclaimer: I'm the queen of the world, so everything is MINE!!! ~evil laughter~. Not really. I'm just a human. The boys are J.K. Rowling's, and I don't have any profit from it, so please don't sue!
Rating: NC-17, overall.
Pairing: Harry\Draco. [

Comments

[paolita_1932]

I love it!! :D First comment?? Awww Draco is soo cute... jealous!possessive!protective!Harry ;) vulnerable!Draco = <333

[luttie]

So happy you loved it ^________^
Yep, first comment here! I didn't have time to publish it yet so... no comments for me, LOL.
and I agree wholeheartedly about the 'Draco is soo cute... jealous!possessive!protective!Harry ;) vulnerable!Draco = <333' bit, ^^

[paolita_1932]

I was wondering if you have updated your story and I followed the first chapter link and I found out you updated =D I hope we will see more jealous!Harry.. since Draco is soo cute and hot I'm sure a lot of people will be after him, boys and girls ;)

[luttie]

Oh, there will be jealous!harry. and many of of it! ~smirk~

[janae_twilight]

I've really been looking forward to this update. Draco is just so precious and as usual Harry is a true hero. He'll make sure that our Little Dragon is well taken care of. Update soon. I can hardly wait to see what happens next.

I've joined the notify list and now I'm off to friend you kulta!

BTW: You are definately right about Ville, eyeliner is soooo his friend *LOL*!

[luttie]

I just can't help and write cute!Draco. I'm a sucker, what can I do? but, as cute as he is, there would be some NC-17 action in a few chapters ~smirk~
the problem is, I'm stuck on the third chapter! but I'm working on it! I will finish a small angst H\D today [I really hope] and then sit and stare at this chapter untill my muse will come to see me again. even if I won't finish this angst togay, I'll start at the chapter tomorrow. ^^

Thank you for joining them ^___________^. ~friend's back~

Friend? It's not his friend, it's his lover! I want to see someone that look half that eatable as Ville look's with eyeliner! God, He look better with it them me with it or any other human being I ever sow! ><.

[janae_twilight]

I am in complete agreement with you. There are not enough words to describe Ville. I'm seriously contemplating getting is face tattooed on my back, if not his face then definately his eyes! anyhoo....i hope your writer's block doesn't last to long. I really ned to know what happens between Harry and Draco. Maybe meditation will help get the creative juices flowing.

[luttie]

I will do a snake tatto on my hip! But, I need monny for it first, lol. but, ville's face as a tatoo will look so hot!!! lol.

Meditation... well, that's not a bad idea... I didn't meditated for so long, I wonder if I will be able to sit still... I will try that later. thank you fot the idea ^_____^

[tomxfelton]

Intriguing! I look forward to more!

I have a question though, if it was proof-read by auroranq, then how can the mistakes be yours alone? I mean, if a beta doesn't notice them then they are mistakes on their part too... *a bit confused*

And I understand the desire to instantly put up your work when it is done (believe me, I know it), but I'd advise not to, when you this many mistakes as it can seriously put off reviewers/readers (especially since you have so many basic mistakes here and words repeating too many times), while your plot may be excellent. I know I used to put up my stories so and oh how embarrassed I feel about it now. Luckily, I took them down years ago, *phew*, lol. Sorry, if I came off too conceited and arrogant - I have a habit of doing that, but I meant it as a word of advice, you know, friendly kind. *weak smile*

[luttie]

Thank you, happy you liked it.

Well, they are my mistakes, it's not like she was the one to wrote them, did see? =] She is only human and can't see all of them. So, they are my little, repeating, many mistakes, that where very sly and escape here checking, lol.

I actually waited quite long, and I still don't have the other two betas,but thank you fotr the advice, it's very appreciate ^_^

and you don't sound too conceited and arrogent at all, you're actually sound very nice ^^.

[tomxfelton]

Well, yeah, I doubt the beta would actually add mistakes. That would kind of beat the point of having one, now doesn't it? Lol. But beta is taken to correct them and if she misses them, then either she simply didn't mention the small ones, or she is incompetent (no offense *blushes

[auroranq]

CFUOTDXIRYVKLHVZ!!!!!!!!!!
You know I love it But You never told me twould be a m-preg in future!!!!!
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!
I freaking Love M-preg (I'm such a freak lol)
Cutesy Draco is my fave here

[luttie]

Really? I didn't? Oh my... I thing it was such a tiny bit about the fic that I forgotten... I'm forgetting thing so fast! what will I ever do with it?
but I happy that you love it and I don't have to search for a new beta ^_^.

Well, Draco is my beloved charcter everyehere, but I have to say that I love all the characters ^_^.
And I wanted to write a cute Draco for so long! lol.

[enchanted_jae]

I look forward to seeing them sharing a room.

[luttie]

Lol, and what a room at that. The next chapter will be done [on my part at last] till te end of the week [if nothing well happen, I hope it won't!!!!], so... yeah. coming soon ^-^.