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Cousin Charlie (Part 5)

Mar 13, 2010 16:58

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geriatricfool March 14 2010, 23:01:38 UTC

Just lovely! thank you. Though, would Spock have put his hand on Charlie's shoulder? Not sure about that, but I'm really impressed that he persisted in his conversation with Charlie and didn't give in and leave. Looking forward to more!

luvntrek March 14 2010, 23:53:06 UTC

When Spock gets emotional, he does touch. (Usually it's Jim or Bones. For example the TOS episode Amok Time when he thought Jim was dead and the TOS episode 'The Empath' when Bones was dying.)

So I saw no problem with him touching Charlie, especially since the two of them were alone.

More to come soon.

geriatricfool March 15 2010, 17:28:28 UTC

I certainly agree Spock does touch, I just wondered if he would when he felt so conflicted himself, and disadvanteged by his own admission in the presence of his cousin. But I love that he did and moved the relationship forward. Looking forward to more!

luvntrek March 15 2010, 23:45:00 UTC

True, I think he did it because he saw his cousin shutting down and it was his way of reaching out to him.
Thanks so much for your comment. More to come soon!

new_hillbilly March 14 2010, 23:11:28 UTC

Awww... family. Well, I'm glad to know Charlie isn't a pedophile! Btw, love the photos of Bones & Kirk. They really fit the story well!

luvntrek March 14 2010, 23:54:34 UTC

Thanks! This is a step in the right direction for both Spock and Charlie, but there are still a few disruptions ahead. More to come soon.

uhurafan March 15 2010, 02:19:41 UTC

Great chapter. I'm glad we got a reason for Charlie and Hailey's relationship. I really didn't want to dislike Charlie. I'm also glad that Spock is reaching out to Charlie.

luvntrek March 15 2010, 08:09:06 UTC

Charlie sees himself more of a big brother than a dad.
Spock and Charlie have made a truce of sorts, but things are not exactly smooth yet. More to come soon.

kayekaye1 March 15 2010, 03:14:13 UTC

That was sweet. I was sure that Charlie wasn't a perv and that he was, in some way, helping the girl.

luvntrek March 15 2010, 08:10:17 UTC

Yes, Charlie is like a big brother to Hailey. More to come soon.

spockchick March 15 2010, 09:00:56 UTC

Aww, liked this, still think spock is being kind of a twit, but he rescued it a bit at the end, thankfully.

luvntrek March 15 2010, 10:46:44 UTC

Yes, you know how it is with family. They can sometimes bring out the best or worst in us depending on the situation. Thanks for your comment. More to come soon.