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Cousin Charlie (Part 14)

Apr 11, 2010 16:39

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threeb_1973 April 13 2010, 00:45:27 UTC

Spock is really letting his freak flag fly :-) And Justine has painted herself into a corner. Can't wait for the next update!

luvntrek April 13 2010, 11:55:34 UTC

Yes Spock has to let it out somehow. I think Justine just obtained herself a permanent Klingon mate! More to come soon.

guitarlovechild April 13 2010, 01:39:17 UTC

Jim is a pervert spying on Spock like that.

luvntrek April 13 2010, 12:26:51 UTC

Jim just couldn't wrap his brain around Spock and Nyota actually being together! Hee hee ! More to come soon!

gerriv April 13 2010, 01:48:29 UTC

Whoo, Spock is getting his freak on. I like it!

luvntrek April 13 2010, 12:27:22 UTC

Oh yeah! More to come soon!

pezzyaltoid April 13 2010, 02:05:05 UTC

I haven't even finished reading and I need to comment, starting with 'I love it!!!!'

"Kirk began coughing, choking on his coffee. It took him almost a minute to recover.
"The bedroom" he gasped totally shocked."

He so deserved to choke!!!! Spock is his best buddy. He shouldn't be shocked. He should congratulate him on being so lucky and having such good taste, no gossiping with the good doctor.

Wonderful chapter so far.

--isobel

luvntrek April 13 2010, 12:29:21 UTC

I think Kirk was taken totally by surprise and now he's worried how their relationship will affect the smooth operation of his ship! Of course he is happy for Spock though and wants him to be happy. More to come soon!

kayekaye1 April 13 2010, 02:31:53 UTC

LOL!! Spock knows the exact amount of time to bring her to an orgasm! LOLOL!!! and MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS, KIRK!! LOL!!! What is Justine going to do now? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

spockchick April 13 2010, 10:22:51 UTC

Hahahaha! Spock needs to fix his bedroom talk!

Altogether now: "Sit on my face and tell me that you love me..." (Monty Python)

Or in Justine and KaMur's case: "Bite on my face and tell me that you love me..."

That gave me a silly, happy mood today. Bad Kirk! Naughty!

luvntrek April 13 2010, 12:31:41 UTC

Kirk is still trying to wrap his head around the fact that his Vulcan friend and his Communications Officer are together. As for Justine, she's knows better than to cross KaMur, but I am sure she'll figure out something!