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Gale Winds 16

Aug 04, 2011 22:48

Title:Gale Winds
Author: Luvsara
Pairing Callie/Arizona
Rated NC-17.
Summary: AU fic. Some details follow the Grey’s story line although time frames are skewed. After Callie’s marriage falls apart, she gets fired as Chief Resident and her first attempt at a new relationship ends horribly bad, her self esteem plummets to a new low, to the point where ( Read more... )

callie/arizona, fanfic

Comments 14

wow bose96 August 5 2011, 11:06:27 UTC

Oh wow … such an intense chapter.. I am emotionally exhausted reading it. The hint of detailed reality hit me like a brick wall again with little things like Arizona swaying for a moment to give into Joanne’s charm. I wanted to just tell Joanne BS .. haha …But then you summarized it all in one poignant powerful paragraph that made me almost leap of my couch and cheer for the power and light it epitomized, like a powerful rise from the ashes when the wings are shaken from ashes and sud and spread powerfully and widely ready to take off. From” but that would have given Joanne all of her power…in this moment, she took her power back and chose to see and reveal her life as an amazing journey through self-discovery.“ to “In this moment, she unbelievingly found clarity and the ability to let the past go… chose to share the light instead of the darkness.” Mmm!.. Love it! Every bit, every word, every nuance and all the deep level of truth in that ( ... )

Re: wow luvsara August 5 2011, 21:05:19 UTC

It's really interesting to see where people are in their own lives as they comment on these chapters. As the drama unfolds, there are always choices in how you deal with them.

Re: wow bose96 August 6 2011, 02:06:44 UTC

I bet it is! Unless this is your nice way of saying I am talking too much.. LOL just kidding ( ... )

Re: wow luvsara August 6 2011, 20:56:00 UTC

No....I love your long comments!

funkyshaz57 August 5 2011, 12:07:25 UTC

A really good chapter! First off to be honest I'm surprised Arizona was so good and gracious to Joanne considering how she treated her, I mean she broke her, she's partly why not fully but partly why Arizona lost a big part of herself...so to just talk with her all night and be calm and forgiving sort of doesn't cut it for me

And as for Mandy well I'd like to kick her ass the skanky bitch lol!

A good chapter and I look forward to more

luvsara August 5 2011, 21:04:08 UTC

It really comes down to whether or not Arizona was going to continue to live in victim mode, or take her power back. She always knew that she would have a hard time not giving in to Joanne....it was a big part of their dance all along. So the choice she made was to give herself final closure with that part of her life.

sapphicwarrior August 5 2011, 18:10:20 UTC

Wonderful update. I hope Arizona's talk with Joanna will help her to let go of some of her past. I loved how Callie stood up against Many, for a moment I was afraid Callie would just go with it because of the fight she had with Arizona.
Looking forward to more :D

pemz August 6 2011, 22:21:58 UTC

These have been some intense and fantastic chapters lately! Fantastic writing btw :) I've really enjoyed the drama; though I kinda wanna knock some sense into the two of them about now lol. Though yay to Callie telling Mandy off...I kinda wanted to take a leaf out of Arizona's book and hit her with a brick, haha! I'm glad Joanne appeared so that Arizona can finally be completely free of her; now here's hoping Callie and her can sort this out soon! Looking forward to more :)