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Reality Check

Oct 01, 2011 12:35

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callie/arizona, fanfic

Comments 15

majincammy October 1 2011, 18:00:57 UTC

Holy stress, Batman! I have a feeling something else is going on with Arizona other than an upset stomach. Maybe with all the stress she's under, it might be an ulcer!

Start of a really good story, imo! You write the chaotic nature of their lives really well and I like the nods you gave to the actual show. Awesome job and I'm looking forward to more!

luvsara October 2 2011, 01:09:10 UTC

Thank you

xena_and_gabby October 1 2011, 18:39:37 UTC

Very much looking forward to more of this and seeing the one issue on the show that I always thought was strange they didn't deal with - I mean, with Arizona being a Paediatric Surgeon - someone at some point should have freaked about her being gay... it's sad, but true... I find they mostly skated past all possible homophobia with the small exception of Callie's parents. At least that's how I am interpreting your A/N :) YAY for another LuvSara fic :)

luvsara October 2 2011, 01:10:49 UTC

yeah, like I said, I'm glad no one makes a big deal about their relationship....it's normal. But, I think the issue deserves exploration.

shinara66 October 1 2011, 20:49:08 UTC

This was a great start. I'm with Majincammy. I think something else might be up with Arizona's upset tummy. lol. Hmm...

Guess we'll have to wait and see. Can't wait for chapter 2.

luvsara October 2 2011, 01:11:58 UTC

glad to see you back on here! I've missed your writing. Thanks for nod.

janice2010 October 1 2011, 21:06:08 UTC

So exciting!
Looking forward to where you are taking us! :-)

funkyshaz57 October 1 2011, 21:17:08 UTC

YAH I'm so happy you're doing another fic even if it is a short one I so love your writing! Really enjoyed this chapter! Great Start, seems life for Arizona is one big ball of stress right now. Pagers suck...big freaking time especially when it interrupts Sexy Times that they clearly haven't had in ages!! Sucky sucky pagers!!

Only thing I wanted to clarify was Starks role in this, I thought that Arizona was head of Ped's again this season and Stark was gone!

Oh and of course I hope to god Arizona is OK seems like it might be more than a missed breakfast that is making her feel so lousy! Cannot wait for more!

luvsara October 2 2011, 00:55:03 UTC

No one has actually said anything about Stark. I'm not sure if he still on the show....but for this fic...he's there.