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luvsara

What Happens Next

Oct 22, 2011 00:00

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callie/arizona, fanfic

Comments 14

greysaddict81 October 22 2011, 04:15:21 UTC

Wahoo!!! Beautifully written...but hello, that wasn't as surprise. I always love your work. I love the way you continued this scene and it really shows that Callie is now stepping up in the relationship. Love it! Can't wait for more of your creations!

luvsara October 22 2011, 13:16:58 UTC

Not my best....I was super tired and under the influence of beer :)

funkyshaz57 October 22 2011, 09:25:09 UTC

Yah you done it! Thank you! It was super hot! Intense and fast paced but bloody awesome! Sexy and Fluffy and just something I keep 'yahing' over lol!

Thank you and freaking awesome stuff!!!!

luvsara October 22 2011, 13:18:30 UTC

Just for you! I almost let it slide, but then I started and it was just too much fun. Glad you liked it

pens_co927 October 22 2011, 10:11:57 UTC

The best part of waking up is not folgers in my cup...it's hot fanfic like this waiting for me! !! Awesome job!

luvsara October 22 2011, 13:19:04 UTC

Hahahaha......that's great!

paboo21 October 22 2011, 14:25:07 UTC

lmfao !!!, that's funny.

intrinsic lust bose96 October 22 2011, 13:42:08 UTC

Now here I go out of town for a couple of days and this is the kind of trouble you get yourself into ..HM-HM! :) well I need to leave town more often ...LOL I just sat down to drink my coffee and feel like I should have made some ice coffee. :) I loved it.. and I love the rhythm and pace off it.. the choice of words like "with intrinsic lust" sounds deep and raw and animalistic. I love Arizona's hope of Callie putting the first being fulfilled and even though I have not see the episode yet I only saw their scenes I am glad they finally brought them back and set boundaries with Mark.

Re: intrinsic lust luvsara October 22 2011, 15:15:37 UTC

I was torn between sweet and sexy.....and sensual. If it wasn't so late last night when I was writing it, I might have made it a bit longer with more dialog, but what the hell....it is what it is. go cool off

flowdeborah October 22 2011, 14:11:49 UTC

Sweet! And such a nice way to wake up on a Saturday morning! Thanks for that.