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July Fic 2: No Distractions Allowed

Jul 27, 2013 23:57

Title: No Distractions Allowed
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Prompt: From Jet(ficwriterjet) - Alaric/Jeremy ( Read more... )

the vampire diaries, july fic

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ficwriterjet July 28 2013, 16:26:05 UTC

Aw, that was so wonderful! I loved it. It was perfect. I loved Ric being all patient and concerned with Jeremy until Jeremy pushes him just a little too far. I loved all the commentary from both Vicki and Anna, distracting Jeremy throughout the story. I liked him being so distracted that he walked into the street without looking, and got hit by a car (without getting seriously hurt). Loved Ric dragging him back to the car, completely exasperated with the kid. I thought the spanking was really well done too. Jeremy's shock, especially since he'd never been in that position before. I loved Ric's frustrated lecturing throughout. I think these were my favorite lines ( ... )