guess who's an epic fail?

[lving_darkness]

Haha, that would be me. So much for thirty days and thirty poems, huh? But I'll keep writing until I've written 30, that I swear by. This poem is much not to my liking, something I wrote quite quickly, no real inspiration behind it. I find it stiff, and void of emotion, but I will let you be Judge, Jury and most likely Executioner.

Idling

I used

Comments

[turkeyish]

i actually like this. it's quite dark. your diction is amazing - Mourning in its chambers...something about that is so lovely.