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A Day in the Life (Flight of the Conchords, Gen fic)

Oct 29, 2008 20:30

Title: A Day in the Life
Author: lye
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Bret, Dave, Murray, Mel, Jemaine, Doug, Greg.
Rating: PG-13, for swearing?
Warnings: None.
Summary: Just some little bits and pieces.
Notes: Ummmm, I don't know. I don't know how much of a Fstory is in here, but I wanted to play around a bit.

A Day in the Life )

flight of the conchords

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lye October 30 2008, 01:19:43 UTC
The awesomeness must be genetic or something! Where do you get yours? I'm glad you enjoyed it though, seriously. I had fun thinking about everyone.

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girlofjuly October 30 2008, 01:11:50 UTC


Oh, it's so perfect!

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lye October 30 2008, 01:21:26 UTC
♥ Thank you.

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teshian October 30 2008, 02:09:43 UTC
Man, this is SO AMAZING. I love every single section, they're all absolutely perfect. Haha DAVE:

The bell on the door rings and Dave looks over to see Bret walk in, halfway through an apple. He’s got some retarded tiger on his sweatshirt and pieces of apple in his beard and yeah, Dave is pretty much the nicest dude alive to be friends with this guy.

HAHAHA THIS IS SO GOOD, OH MY GOD, HOW DO YOU DO THE THINGS YOU DO. And Dave having to uphold his cool image! His mom stealing his last apple strudel! MAN.

And how in the world did you manage to get inside Greg and Doug's head SO WELL? What is this.. witchcraft?! Doug with his sudoku (he wants marriage to be more like sudoku! yes!) and he pretends not to see her blow a kiss to the building as they drive away. And Greg wearing a FotC t-shirt! Listening in on the meeting! And this line, which is PERFECT:

A coworker walks by and Greg picks up the phone, as if he’s about to call somebody important about something. He watches them retreat around the corner and puts the phone back in its ( ... )

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lye October 30 2008, 02:51:05 UTC
Dude, I love Dave SO MUCH. If I could get into his mind and live in there, I probably would. I'm glad you enjoyed all of the parts, I tried to keep them all as.. in character as I could.

Greg and Doug were the most difficult! Doug especially. I was just like, WHO THE FUCK IS HE?

Haha Bret's tea outburst, he's so inconsiderate. Sigh.

Thank you so much for this, it made me smile.

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teshian October 30 2008, 15:40:58 UTC
Haha I know right! Like, Doug has been in what, THREE episodes for all of TEN SECONDS EACH? But I can totally picture him here! I always wondered why exactly he put up with Mel's Conchords obsession, and I think I kind of understand now (well done, you!).

Hee yeah, Jemaine's all, 'GEEZ WHAT IS WITH THE NOISE'. I know, Jemaine, life is HARD. PEOPLE. ugh.

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lye October 30 2008, 23:03:13 UTC
I love those brief glimpses of Doug. When he was in the basement playing on the computer during Mel's dinner? I felt SO BAD.

Poor Jemaine, his life IS hard. He deserves a nap.

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she_burns1 October 30 2008, 03:52:11 UTC
Okay, so, you all ready know I adore and worship you and you all ready know I love this fic so...I don't really know what else to add?

There are so many things I love in this fic! And I see you went back and did some polishing! It's all sparkly now!! This fic is just wonderful, so, so wonderful! So ♥♥♥!!! XDDD

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lye October 30 2008, 04:01:29 UTC
I did polish! I put away the illegal substances and got'er done. You know the love is mutual!

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ballroombubble October 30 2008, 09:30:40 UTC
Wow! Just...absolutely stunning O_O

I shrieked with laughter and quite possibly woke the neighbours (it's morning here) at Bret and his mother's mismatched curtains and drapes. Yay for weirding out Dave without even trying!

Murray doing an impression of a nutcracker is somehow perfect.

I felt SO sorry for Doug :'(

And Greg! Greg, we love you! Does nobody ever get any real work done at the New Zealand Consulate? :D

You win <3

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lye October 30 2008, 12:33:11 UTC
Apologies to your possibly woken up neighbours! The last thing I want it to wake people up early, since I'm awake early today too and its HELL.

Poor, confused Murray. I love him.

I feel bad for Doug, too. :(

LMFAO Greg is somehow so hilarious to me. I'd like to think nothing ever gets done there.

YOU win, thanks for commenting <3

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