Something Burning (R)

Nov 05, 2012 18:05

Prompt: Tim/Raylan - there's a martyr in my bed tonight from nvrleaveharlan by norgbelulah.
Title: Something Burning
Rating: R
Word Count: ~2300
A/N: Come hang out at let's have us a whoop-de-do and write!
Summary: It's been a long goddamn day.

The problem isn’t that Raylan’s there. )

complete, raylan givens, tim/raylan, fic, nvrleaveharlan, justified, word count: 0-5000, tim gutterson

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norgbelulah November 5 2012, 18:28:18 UTC
Damn, I thought this fic was good, but then I got to the end and fell in fucking love.

This was fabulous. What a great response to the prompt! Thank youuu.

Just, that last paragraph is freaking PERFECT. <333

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lymricks November 9 2012, 00:07:58 UTC
Your comments always make me smile so hard. Thank you so much! You just give really, really, really excellent and tempting prompts. <333

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someotherstorm November 6 2012, 01:51:33 UTC
al;ksdfjas;lkdfjas;lkdfjas;lkdfjaslkdfjasdfj!!!

ahhhh your Tim is GREAT i want to draw hearts around him and then drink whiskey with him and probably make out with him >>

this is so awesome and sexy and this part --

He thinks about seeing if he could pick someone off--no, up, off is the wrong word, god dammit.

THAT IS AMAZING <3_<3 ack this is great :D

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lymricks November 9 2012, 00:08:48 UTC
:D Thank you so much! I want so much more of him drinking whiskey on the show, it's not even logical. Thank you again :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. <3

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perdiccas November 6 2012, 06:46:14 UTC
omg omg omg this is amazing. you write tim so well, i am in awe. ♥

(also so super hot, omg. I love it!!)

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lymricks November 9 2012, 00:09:22 UTC
Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :) <3

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chemm80 November 7 2012, 07:30:54 UTC
There is no way I'm NOT reading a Tim/Raylan fic anyway, but this really surpassed my expectations. I love your Tim voice, and how Raylan approaches him with such respect for his abilities. My military-competency-badass kink: let me show you it. Also, I wouldn't have thought a sex description (I'm not sure you can even call it a "scene") could be that hot. I absolutely love the way you lead them into having sex, the way there's not freaking out or resistance, but just something that happens. Love this, begining to end.

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lymricks November 9 2012, 00:14:45 UTC
Eeee this was such a lovely comment to get. Thank you! I have such a thing for writing Tim's war stories, even if they're only background. If you like military competence-badassness then you should totally read engage_protocol's fic Possibly, I like the thrill in which she writes my favorite Tim and Raylan line in the history of ever, but I won't say it here so I don't ruin it. Seriously, though. Cannot recommend it enough.

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chemm80 November 9 2012, 03:01:46 UTC
I LOVE military competence-badassedness, so of course I'm a Tim Gutterson fan, as well as a Generation Kill one. (In fact, I think that's a lot of what originally attracted me to Dean Winchester, and my first fandom, Supernatural.) I read the story, loved it, friended your friend. Oh, and you also. ;)

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corbyinoz February 26 2013, 10:01:09 UTC
This is brilliant. I'm new to Justified and Tim Gutterson, but I adore him, and this? Is heaven.

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lymricks March 6 2013, 16:02:09 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it (and I hope you continue to love Justified, because it is the best).

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