For My Blood Runs Chill

[lynlee_g]

Title: For My Blood Runs Chill
Author: lynleeg
Rating: PG-13 I suppose?
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimers: Just borrowing.
Summary: Sam and Dean are lost in unforgiving woods in the dead of winter.
Reviewed by a friend of mine.
Title from a poem by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle

“Why did it have to be somewhere cold Sammy?”

The environment around them was unforgiving,

Comments

[aja_evenstar]

Ok wow.

That was so good, and so heart breaking =( I love the whole role reversal of the brothers, and you kept them in character really well, especially Sam. It is so sad yet beautiful that Sam was still stroking Dean's back. I wonder if he knew his brother was gone?

Really good job (Y)

[lynlee_g]

Thank you for the review! I feel so bubbly inside after reading it. I see now why people love comments to their stories, it is like crack.
I was worried about whether I had managed to keep Sam and Dean in character and it is a relief to hear you say I did.

[aja_evenstar]

Oh yes, story comments are always very exciting. However when the writer is deserving, its exciting to give them as well ;)

[aja_evenstar]

Dammit. That ^ was me. Forgot to log in =S

As you can see, intelligence is abundant in my corner.

[iamthedirtgirl]

that was really good but I have to say it...

YOU KILLED DEAN! YOU BASTARD!

Wonderful fic. Poignant and if you hadn't killed dean I would have saved it to my memories cause I totally dig winchesters vs the elements with dean injured stories. Just so long as they live.
(you're probably gonna catch hell for killing dean and not putting a death fic warning up there, but don't do it unless YOU feel it's needed. In my own opinion, this story works better with it as a surprise.)

[lynlee_g]

Thank you!
Sorry about that whole, killing Dean thing.
And yeah, I wasn't sure about the warning for death!fic. My friend thought the same as you, told me it would ruin it if I did.

[inanna_maat]

oooh my God!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You killed Dean! wow... what a sad story with an amazing end, I think....

Well written, good first job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*crying*

[lynlee_g]

Thank you! :D

*hands tissues*

[pcdean]

oh god!! crying freely...poor sam~~ dean has got his peace, but how about the one left~~

an amazing story though with such a sad yet moving end!!

hide and sobbing...

[lynlee_g]

Sorry I made you cry. :(
I'll be a bit nicer to Dean next time.
**passes some tissues**

[ewanspotter]

Aw. Very sad. (Made more so by the fact that Sam's so unaware of what's going on around him.)

[lynlee_g]

Thanks for commmenting!

Love the icon, by the way.

[ewanspotter]

Thanks! My friend hopelessfangirl made that. She did a bunch of Supernatural/The Office (quotes) icons a while back. I don't even watch The Office, but they're still hysterical.