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Jan 22, 2006 16:42
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My paper, help critique so far!
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dree308
January 22 2006, 21:44:55 UTC
umm.. it sucks? yeah bad too
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lynn31632
January 22 2006, 21:45:28 UTC
i hate you you cant have read it that fast
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lynn31632
January 22 2006, 21:45:15 UTC
Ps-pink means im unsure if im going to use it, or there might be a mistake(spelling/grammer) in it
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dree308
January 22 2006, 21:52:24 UTC
the - : money - thing doesn't make sence.
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lynn31632
January 22 2006, 21:53:38 UTC
In paragraph one?
Gramatically speaking, or like in the actual topic
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