Comments | lynnxlady: Chocolate Candy Bar, Anko&Hanabi, 1229 words

lynnxlady

Chocolate Candy Bar, Anko&Hanabi, 1229 words

Jul 28, 2006 20:00

So, mattador said one day that he wanted to write Anko as Hanabi's genin teacher, to which I replied, DO IT. and also, if you do, I will so write AnkoHana fanfic of fanfic! (Warning: Hanabi is still a girl in this, but nothing between them actually happens, so ( Read more... )

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mattador July 29 2006, 15:09:40 UTC

Oh maaaaaaan. You have taken my humble foundations and built upon them a tower of awesome.

...this should continue to be written, just in back-and-forth snippets.

lynnxlady July 30 2006, 03:45:10 UTC

:D Thank you.

...yes, yes it should. I sort of see this as the first move in something thick and sexual and unspoken that hangs there between Anko & Hanabi for years before something is finally done about it (because my Anko is fucked up enough to want to do twelve year olds, but not enough to actually do so), and when they finally fuck, it's some mixture of anger and yearning and big on issues of control, which all adds up to explosively hot.

mattador July 30 2006, 19:54:49 UTC

I agree. I have another segment halfway written already, but I won't be online again until Thursday at the earliest.

lynnxlady July 30 2006, 23:11:34 UTC

Awesome. Hope to see that Thursday-ish, then.

roseatesque July 30 2006, 06:17:45 UTC

Ooooh, I thought this was amazingly done, as crazy as the concept was here. Hot, subtle UST between student to teacher & reverse, overflowing with gorgeous details, unsaid feelings, actions, and some wonderfully written dialogue. Gah, how *do* you do this? thanks to this ficlet and the earlier snippets by mattador, I've just earned myself a new yuri OTP. (although, I don't think I mind a bit, in any case.)

This was both believable and fascinating. and with that little back-story, it made every part flow out in neat sequences. As vague as Hanabi's character was in canon, I'm wholly able to believe your approach on her, and her relationship with Anko. ah, Anko, *_*. I mean, /wow/, her voice and actions were very in-character of her; even how her room was described (for all its informality) was appropriate. This was utterly enjoyable to read.

Kudos. <3<3<3

lynnxlady July 30 2006, 19:12:42 UTC

Thank you! Wow, that was a lovely review. I'm glad you liked this fic so much. When mattador mentioned the scenario, AnkoHana just jumped at me. I really like what-Hanabi-could-be, and Anko of course is awesome. And teacher/student of course is one of my kinks.