interest 20/48 - kunoichi-as-whore

[lynnxlady]

Anko & Hanabi. In which Anko gives almost-fifteen year old Hanabi that talk. The kunoichi one. (same world as Chocolate Candy Bar, but three years later.) 880-ish words.

Comments

[mattador]

Awwwww. Great reactions from Hanabi!

[lynnxlady]

:D Thank you. (this was quite the awesome idea. Hanabi & Anko play off one another well.)

[mattador]

They rrally do. We rock...

[spacehussy]

That was so incredibly, completely awesome. Your characterization of Anko is dead-on, and I love this idea of her as Hanabi's jounin instructor XD The traumatizing sex talk cracked me up ♥

[lynnxlady]

Thanks. Anko is quite fun to write. Especially her traumatizing sex talk.

[sintari]

Wow, I'm falling in love with your Anko. In love! And your Hanabi... she's got that aristocratic thing down pat. Damn, girl. You are THE shit.

Oddly, the thing that really made me seethe with jealousy in this piece was the off-the-cuff description of Anko's office, of Hanabi's ankles. With about five words you have me in the scene. Now that is talent. *hugs* Keep it up, babe!

[lynnxlady]

:D, thanks so much! I'm thrilled you like it. I'm having fun writing Anko. And Hanabi is just so interesting to me, too. & I'm liking bringing Anko (badass, messy, practical) face to face with all the Hyuuga pride and tradition embodied in that one fucked up little girl.

[qem_chibati]

I really enjoyed this, you did such a great job with the characterisation fo Anko.