NaruSakuSasu smut - NC-17

Sep 09, 2006 20:15

Edit: Title: Him-and-her-and-him

5,700 words. I called the length dead-on, :D.

I need a title, but I'm bad at them and I'm about to run off and start partying for the night (oh god NaruSakuSasu ATE MY HOMEWORK TIME.)

This is both the Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura drabble grown into a monster, and the fic I owe mad_and_crazy from the smut meme. It is also me Actually ( Read more... )

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mattador September 10 2006, 01:40:53 UTC
Mmmm. Goddamn.

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lynnxlady September 10 2006, 20:30:30 UTC
:D, I gather you like.

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mattador September 11 2006, 06:13:19 UTC
Rather. It's one of the hotter things I've read since... whenever you last posted smut.

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lynnxlady September 10 2006, 20:32:06 UTC
Hee, glad you enjoyed :D. NaruSakuSasu = so hot.

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lynnxlady September 16 2006, 15:30:25 UTC
:D - as of timeskip, I am increasingly enamoured of the idea of SakuNaru as the cornerstone upon which healthy SakuSasu can be built (and of course NaruSasu. But even though Naruto is the one most likely to make Sasuke do things in the heat of the moment, somehow I see Sasuke reaching out for Sakura as more likely. Just because he has the least amount of violent twistiness with her, so he can let his guard down a bit more. So if I were to write a sequel from Sasuke's POV, it would have more Sasu-->Naru, but all of that is bottled up in the cold bastard & Naruto does not have the best track record of reading people, so.)

(ANOTSU/RIN OTP, Y/N - CORRECT ANSWER: Y! Isn't it hot? And there is no fic! Not that there's much fic at all, and most of it is Anotsu/Magatsu or Manji/Rin. Fandom, you are my eternal despair. *pokes it with a stick. a sharp pointy one.*)

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sour_water September 10 2006, 09:47:03 UTC
You so win for this.

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mad_and_crazy September 10 2006, 10:12:35 UTC
... I agree. Can we keep her?

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lynnxlady September 10 2006, 20:35:54 UTC
yay!

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mad_and_crazy September 10 2006, 10:19:56 UTC
... yeeeeeeeeeee-ow.

So you *are* aware that I'm probably going to end up Doing Things while reading this, yes? Cause Damn.

Hell, you even got all of my kinks. Except anal, but we'll leave that for the sequel...

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lynnxlady September 10 2006, 20:47:38 UTC
Heh, glad you liked/enjoyed :P.

See? I promised you someone would come on Sakura and someone did. And hell, maybe Sasuke did too.

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a_white_rain September 16 2006, 03:36:30 UTC
I couldn't get to this right away with Internet being gone, but it was so worth it. I love your Naruto. And how much he loves Sakura and the strange sort of love for Sasuke and how they all love each other and this line:

So it was rather a mess. But it was a fun one. And it was also a right mess, he thought in the aftermath:

And this:
After all, Sakura was partial to cuddling, after. (So was Naruto.) Sasuke was going to become partial to it, even if it required tying him down.

It's funny, because it'd probably be true.

And I think he'd like being tied up. If just to make it more difficult.

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lynnxlady September 16 2006, 15:46:51 UTC
:D Thank you!

And how much he loves SakuraThat was one of my favorite parts of writing this. I don't write untempered romance much, but sometimes it hits me in all the right ways; and no, Naruto's not the most romantic character; he's irrevelant and blunt and stubborn and (I see him as) roughly sexual, but for Sakura, I think underneath it all, there would be just SO MUCH love, love he can express in all its grandiose, sometimes tender, sometimes fierce, scale. (For Sasuke, he can't quite put it into the words he can find for Sakura; his love for him is more expressed in actions - not that his for Sakura isn't, but the words are there for her too ( ... )

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a_white_rain September 16 2006, 16:10:07 UTC
I agree. One of my favorite parts of the series is how much Naruto loves Sakura, how much it means to him that she loves him back. They're not as messy or intense as NaruSasu or SasuSaku, so they don't often interest me as much, but like you, I do like a NaruSaku in an all about Sasuke way that doesn't forget they lvoe each other.

In fact there should be more fics like that. I'll write one once I get my NaruSaku fic done. In which it's not implied NaruSasuSaku. And it's pretty hard.

I say yes to a sequal. Sasuke with bondage with another NaruSaku leaning would be awesome.

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