Rewritten Mind of a Shikon Miko

[lynxyoukai]

warnings - character death, implied sexual relations
this is a first draft...it could change greatly...tell me what you all think though...can always use some critisism. ^_^ just try to make it productive and not too vindictive

Comments

[anduril_phoenix]

Awwwww...the ending is so sweet. I like this.

[lynxyoukai]

thanks...it wasn't what i expected it to be but i already have another idea for an original story...so my muse calls.

[anduril_phoenix]

Have fun writing.

[lynxyoukai]

i'll try...i hope my muse isn't just fucking with me and is ready to get playing

[naede]

i have printed it off and will read it tonight and comment on it tomorrow okay? lol *HUGS* probably will be doing that often lol...just be glad you dont live here or i would probably hang all over you all the time...lol

[lynxyoukai]

k, tell me what you think...it might be a little confusing even if you do know the show...if not, major confusion. i have no problem having someone hanging all over me...i only get uneasy when it is a lot of people.

[naede]

i promise i wouldnt let many people hang over you...probably only me

[naede]

oh and your story is awesome and yeah was very confused but i got the basic gist of it it was awesome!!!!!

[naede]

lol just so he can breath?...how bout i dont bring him? he has turned into a GIANT ASS lol