Because this won't end in new prompts and plotbunnies, I swear...

Jan 19, 2011 21:33

Stolen from evil_little_dog:

Give me the title of a story I've never written, and your feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any or all of the following: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit ( Read more... )

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Review for: Left Turn at Albuquerque evil_little_dog January 20 2011, 04:03:03 UTC
Thank you so much for this fic! Thomas could charm Riza out of her guns, couldn't he? From your descriptions of the Tachi, I could see their (and Roy's) faces perfectly! And teaming him up with the Elrics because, "he beat Major Armstrong at arm wrestling and needed to go somewhere" was hysterical!

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Re: Review for: Left Turn at Albuquerque lyrangalia January 20 2011, 04:30:02 UTC
First sentence: The first thing Thomas thought upon coming to was that he was never going to challenge Sanya to a drinking contest again.

Last sentence: Waving as the car bounced off in into the sunset, its brand new dragon-shaped front casting an ominous shadow behind it, Thomas thought for the first time he could understand what Harry saw in Murphy.

Reason why it never got posted: Roy + Harry + fire

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Re: Review for: Left Turn at Albuquerque evil_little_dog January 20 2011, 04:32:22 UTC
Roy + Harry + Fire would indeed be a veeerry bad idea. :D

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Re: Review for: Left Turn at Albuquerque lyrangalia January 20 2011, 04:33:29 UTC
I feel uncomfortably warm thinking about it!

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cornerofmadness January 20 2011, 04:44:44 UTC
Grounding

I loved seeing Alexis ground her father for bad behavior and that Kate and Martha enjoyed it so much was icing on the cake

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lyrangalia January 21 2011, 21:21:34 UTC
For some reason this one took a while to work through.

First sentence(s): "Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!"

It wasn't until the fourth or fifth syllable in my daughter's shriek that it occurred to me that maybe I had gone too far.

The thing that made me want to write it: Wondering just how much trouble Castle could get into with silly putty and compressed air in the name of research.

The scene that hit the cutting room floor:Beckett was starting to get better at the espresso machine than I was. Even if she still insisted on putting in nondairy creamer ( ... )

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cornerofmadness January 22 2011, 03:13:36 UTC
oops sorry but it is hysterical. thank you

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