All joking aside, I'm so glad you're writing. You've barely even described your city yet, and it's already got the... dare I say hopeful tone of people starting out in a frontier town. I love going into it knowing it will be something special (the memorial, the name change). I love the glimpses of everyone and where they've ended up - with all the quick time changes and scene changes you've managed to make an introductory part engaging, even exciting.
I really liked this. The dynamic between Kel and Merric is spot-on, the soldiers are hilarious, the Lords joke was awesome. It's quite a refreshing read.
I'm so glad you're writing something new. I like the POV changes, the way each passage reveals a little something new about the future, and the humour. I look forward to more.
(Oh, and yes: Uncle Lerant has your back? Made my day.)
I haven't written anything in such a long time - with the exception of bits and pieces for school, of course - that I'm really out of practice. So thanks, the encouragement is much needed and appreciated! I promise, too, that there is much more Lerant to come. He even has a story line. Shocking!
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All joking aside, I'm so glad you're writing. You've barely even described your city yet, and it's already got the... dare I say hopeful tone of people starting out in a frontier town. I love going into it knowing it will be something special (the memorial, the name change). I love the glimpses of everyone and where they've ended up - with all the quick time changes and scene changes you've managed to make an introductory part engaging, even exciting.
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(Oh, and yes: Uncle Lerant has your back? Made my day.)
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