Comments | lyredenfers: mon pays c'est l'hiver (the more that things stay the same)

lyredenfers

mon pays c'est l'hiver (the more that things stay the same)

Mar 21, 2009 21:23

I don't know, this might change. But...

Postcards From New Hope
(Or How to Grow a Woman from the Ground)

( Part Four )

new hope, books: pierce, fic

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lyredenfers March 22 2009, 22:29:58 UTC

Hahaha, oops and fixed. No lolcats here!

A reply from Corus is talking about in Part Three, when Kel tells Lerant that they are going to have to ask for help. They are not equipped to self-sustain the infrastructure of a growing city on a war torn border.

Hopefully the next update won't be so long coming :D

girl_called_sun March 22 2009, 11:33:19 UTC

With your adventures in the frozen North, I was afraid this would be on hiatus, but I am happily proven wrong.

The little one-on-one conversations (between Neal and Yuki, Strachan and Hope, and especially Kel and Dom) are wonderful. I'm getting fond of Strachan.

And I suspect the mages and Prince Jasson will be nothing but trouble.

lyredenfers March 22 2009, 22:31:41 UTC

On the contrary, I have time to write for once! Though I have serious issues trying to balance description and conversation. Someday I will find a good combination of the two?

Your suspicions of Jasson and his men are not unfounded :D

anait March 24 2009, 04:54:54 UTC

Don't change it; I love it.

The Kel-Dom friendship is great. I also like Jasson's mages riding in because: 1) cool idea, and 2) you've already said that in the future the people of Mindelan's Bound hate mages.

Jasson, what did you do???!

lyredenfers March 24 2009, 07:45:40 UTC

Hey, you! I can see you on goldenlake and want to talk to yoooouuuu.

Jasson would like to think that he's badass, but he's really not. He is competent though! I like the idea of having a company of nonwarriors that can sit around and solve the world's problems. Kind of like the U.N.!