Comments | lyrical_liessss: LJ Idol Week 17- The Caged Bird

lyrical_liessss

Mar 08, 2010 00:01

Up the stairs. Running, running, running. No way out. She sees nothing but doors, all closed, keys no where to be found ( Read more... )

Comments 13

cacophonesque March 10 2010, 21:19:45 UTC

I liked that last line a lot. And those last 5 words were perfect. They explained everything, without overexplaining.

teaberryblue March 10 2010, 22:16:51 UTC

Hahahaha! I love how you turned it around at the end there. It completely changed the whole tone of the piece.

onda_bianca March 11 2010, 00:22:44 UTC

Chilling. I love the ending.

crimsonplum March 11 2010, 04:09:28 UTC

This reminds me distinctly of a dream I had when I was 15...seemed quite real! Nicely done.

hug_machine March 11 2010, 05:53:08 UTC

0.0

Wow, that was creepy and surreal. But well done!