Thou Shalt Not

[lyrical_mess52]

Title: Thou Shalt Not
Author: lyrical_mess52
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Billie/Mike

Right and wrong are abstract concepts, based on perception and observation. They were both old enough to know that right and wrong were subjective in most cases. This wasn’t one of those.

It was wrong. It wasn’t one of those grey-area, open-to-interpretation kind of things

Comments

[coldlikedeath]

ooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

hot and sexy and wrong and a million other things all at once... i love it to death.

[dorsetgirl]

Oooohhh, I like this. Oh yes. A lot.

perfect little fingers stole his voice

Wine-flower kisses drugged him

perfectly forest-colored eyes stopped his breath

I love these phrases - absolutely gorgeous. This is lovely work, a very plausible look at how things could be. Thank you for some fantastic images!

[minchka]

Ooh, I like this. It's all sparkly and shimmery and dark and it kind of dances. That's how I see this story. I'm sane I swear. *thumbs up*

[dragon013]

Ugh, loved the last few lines. Wonderful! Hope you post more in this comm.
-J X

[awfulstate]

guuuuuuh

But that low, drawn out moan would echo from nowhere.

Michael.

He wasn’t really all that religious anyway.

<3