First Timer:

[foonalicious]

I haven't submitted anything yet because I haven't felt inspired by the things around me, but recently I've picked up knitting. Recently, as in two days ago, and I was scanning in my recent accomplishment and words kind of seeped out. So have at it. Hope it isn't too terrible!

Comments

[fictional_rain]

i liked it... I felt twisted and neat. You achieved your desired effect, I think.

But I do think your second text could be better-placed.
It just sort of bothers me when dark text goes over dark background.
... sometimes it's rather hard to distinguish what the text says.

Good luck!

[foonalicious]

thanks! I didn't really stop to think about it, but that's pretty good (and if I had been paying attention, obvious ;-) advice!