Comments | lyricalmomentum: {o37}

ronniexo in lyricalmomentum

{o37} | initiation: retake

Sep 30, 2009 13:47

initiation: retake.
nc-17; yoomin (yoochun x changmin); smut(dirteh talk, gun play)
yoochun is the boss of a gang, and changmin wants to join said gang.
will be locked in twenty four hours.
yes, i've made another version of this fic. why? i have no clue, but i think i prefer the original version more than this. for xiahwase and melchunology, who both loved the ( Read more... )

title!initiation, kink!rough sex, length!one-shot, rating!nc-17, fandom!dong bang shin ki, pairing!yoochun/changmin, genre!smut, kink!gun play

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ronniexo September 30 2009, 17:57:15 UTC

spot for xiahwase.
you said you wanted gun play last night. ..err this morning, so i tried to make this better than the original and failed
ilu bby♥

xiahwase October 2 2009, 06:00:00 UTC

-completely dead- (and late LOL)
gunplay is just... (W*¨&!@&*(¨!@&*A¨W%¨@#¨too much for me -faints-

I don't remember version 1 xD -goes read version 1-
ok... now...
I like this one better, dunno why~ but... AE(*!@#!#¨@&*!¨again just because

"you followed every single one of my orders. . .i believe that makes you my bitch."
lol Changmin is TEH WIN!

<33

ronniexo September 30 2009, 17:57:53 UTC

spot for melchunology.
you loved the original, so maybe you'll like this one?
either way. . .ilu♥

melchunology October 1 2009, 01:42:57 UTC

i love both! /dances. :D

i love you too. <33

ronniexo October 1 2009, 01:44:44 UTC

/watches you dance
i'm glad you liked it.

d'aww.
/pokes your cheek

amiidear September 30 2009, 18:09:22 UTC

oh goodness.
<3
the ending made me giggle~
my junsu, you're so good at writing!
:'D

cerinityks September 30 2009, 20:21:26 UTC

OMG YOOMIN! <3

bb, that was freaking hot! OMG I loved it as much as the original!

san;og8iljfk, for hot, kinkey YooMin pr0n, ILUSM!

Also, that last line by Minnie? Epic! I loved it.

<33

(LOL, OMG my spazz >.<)

ronniexo September 30 2009, 22:21:08 UTC

hahahaha,
i'm glad you liked it, bby<3

ilusmm<3

yup. minnie is always a snarky bitch.

<33

(spazzing is fun<3)

aribrikapanda1 October 1 2009, 01:10:56 UTC

"good. . .oh and by the yoochunnie. . ."
"mn."
"you followed every single one of my orders. . .i believe that makes you my bitch."

Changmin ALWAYS wins lol

you its hard to keep a straight face in my chem lecture reading this. I wonder what the guy next to me think if he knew I was reading this xD

aribrikapanda1 October 1 2009, 01:12:51 UTC

Damn I hate typos!

*You know *would

ronniexo October 2 2009, 21:01:19 UTC

lol.
changmin does always winn<3

why were you a chem lecture reading this? personally, when i got done writing this i was totally aroused. . .gunplay kills me.
/blushes

aribrikapanda1 October 3 2009, 00:46:54 UTC

Because my chem lecture is 5:30 to 8 I have to find something exciting to do while the teacher drones on with his monotone voice xP That was totally hot! I've never read anything that involved guns...but I LIKED it :D

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