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{o43} | kotoba wa iranai: chapter one

Oct 27, 2009 22:19

kotoba wa iranai: chapter one.
pg-13; yunchun/twou (yoochunxyunho), jaesu (changmin x jaejoong x junsu); general
this is the love story of jung yunho and park yoochun. yunho plays the part of a prostitute. low on money and needing a way to support himself, he turned to prostitution just to survive. yoochun plays the part of your everyday rich guy. ( Read more... )

pairing!yoochun/yunho, genre!general, kink!none, series!言葉はいらない, pairing!jaejoong/junsu/changmin, warning!depression, fandom!dong bang shin ki, genre!angst, rating!pg-13

Comments 7

criztalinz February 28 2010, 12:08:01 UTC

ooohh.. me likie!! i like the old ver. as well.. seme!Chun/uke1yunho?? I'm so in bb!! XXDD

tobaccowhispers February 28 2010, 12:16:32 UTC

-laughs-
i loved the old version too. . .
but i hit a huge writer's block.
i might finish both versions.

yes!
uke!ho for the win.
♥

pawshingo March 6 2010, 12:58:49 UTC

I didn't read the first version but after reading this other version, it makes me want to read it! I like!

shanancelice December 10 2010, 13:21:12 UTC

I like it (and the old ver too :D)... This one gave a different air though, the plot is alike but the old one was a pink fluff ^ v ^ while this new ver bring a painful picture of yunnie from the beginning. I wonder how the story will process...

The depression partly faded away when Yoochun appeared though XDDD. And what with 2U couple? Dirty talk since the very first conversation 6__

naraku_vision December 11 2010, 20:39:48 UTC

i'm glad you liked them. too bad, i never finished either of them.>>

that was what i wanted to happen. basically, it was to show that someone had peaked yunho's interest from the beginning. yoochun's character is supposed to be that rich guy everyone either loves or hate, he's cocky and seducing. hence the dirty talk. Plus, it was used instead of the horrible grease he normally uses. it wasn't that they were closer, it was just that the closenesss they had wasn't completely shown as quick as in the older one. changmin intereacts with everyone this time around. . . well, he would have if i didn't stop writing this.

shanancelice December 13 2010, 10:44:56 UTC

Tehee...

I hope one day in the future, u will have the inspiration again then ^^

naraku_vision December 13 2010, 10:59:34 UTC

i do too.
if i do, i'll probably end up posting it at asianfanfics.com rather than here.
i don't like posting fanfiction much here anymore that is dbsk related.