this worst part about forgiving, this knowing once a choice was made: to not be the side of the coin that lands face up in a trembling palm.
have i told you yet?..
okay, this is ridiculous 1) because we haven't talked in eons, & 2) because it's dealing with the semantics of such a beautiful thing... but i thought i'd check up on you & anyway, that little section is so stunning that it needs space around it, or neon arrows pointing or something close.
i can't tell if this will come off as being obnoxious or not, especially as it's not like you asked for input, but, yeah. think about it, yo. you have some really good words. i don't know about "back," but only because i didn't notice your having gone anywhere.
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this worst part about forgiving, this
knowing once a choice was made:
to not be the side of the coin that lands
face up in a trembling palm.
have i told you yet?..
okay, this is ridiculous 1) because we haven't talked in eons, & 2) because it's dealing with the semantics of such a beautiful thing... but i thought i'd check up on you & anyway, that little section is so stunning that it needs space around it, or neon arrows pointing or something close.
i can't tell if this will come off as being obnoxious or not, especially as it's not like you asked for input, but, yeah. think about it, yo. you have some really good words. i don't know about "back," but only because i didn't notice your having gone anywhere.
xo,
jessica
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