Drowning

[m00bs]

Title:  Drowning
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: NC-17
Warning: sex, nothing too explicit
Summary:  When they finally break apart, Jinki gasps for air, coughing as it fills his lungs. Kissing Kibum is like drowning, and that thought doesn't frighten him nearly as much as it should.
a/n: this was kinda for that itune meme thing so the ending came out abrupt

Comments

[2pmconspiracy]

spot first :D

comment later~

[2pmconspiracy]

*claps* this was freaking awesome!

my heart broke at the last line though O: and this was really just too good for words!

thanks so much for sharing! i absolutely loved this ♥

[caitlinonkey]

"Kissing Kibum is like drowning, and that thought doesn't frighten him nearly as much as it should."

I think I love you. It was all good kinds of hot, and sweet at the same time, with just the right amount of heartbreak... :D

PS, who gives about jonghyun, LOVE THE TOFU.

<3

[salted_taiyaki]

last line killed me
I'm down

this was so beautiful and everything. the details and the hushed emotions, I just. oh god. stop with this amazing writing please [just kidding, obv. ♥]

[cracknut23]

I. My Heart. Everything is so. I. ;______;
It's so heartbreaking but at the same time so perfect, so real, the way you described Jinki's emotions.

[m00bs]

;____________________; /don't cry, bb!

I'LL WRITE ONEW/KEY FLUFF NEXT TIME. D: