Curiosity

Apr 10, 2010 00:00


Title: Curiosity
Pairing: former!Onew/Key, mentions Jonghyun/Key
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kibum laughed easily, and more often, and that for perhaps the first time in my memory, he lost the restlessness that was so innate, so much a part of him as his DNA.
a/n: tried a first person this time.

It is easier to watch Kibum now. )

pairing: onew/key, genre: angst, rating: pg13

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airocker April 17 2010, 13:14:45 UTC
Thank you.I am poor.

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namae_nai April 17 2010, 14:50:04 UTC
Hmm well I guess it's a tradition now. when it's a happy period for onkey fans, everyone starts writing broken onkey :D
whatever, I like it anyway

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salted_taiyaki April 17 2010, 15:43:28 UTC
spot oh my god this looks fantastic to read but i am pressed for time
wheeze

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salted_taiyaki April 17 2010, 22:03:39 UTC
If our eyes met he would look away quickly, ingrained reflex, then back again, and his jaw would set, silently daring, until one of us, usually me, would finally look away.

if i had the words to explain just how uncomfortably beautiful this was, believe me, i'd write an essay -- but i can't bring myself to write about this wonderful piece and completely underestimate it with the limited vocabulary that i hold. god, this was. i don't even-- it's like, the perfect after-break up piece that one would write in their notebook of tragedies, just so much more beautiful, maybe because it's jinki writing it, about kibum especially?

i can't even pick which part i loved the most -- the moment when they chose to cross the line, or when they stepped over it and realized just what went wrong. i love them both, honestly, and i just can't-- idek what to say now, seriously.

And it is easier to watch him now, when he is looking away, though perhaps harder to bear, as I realize he’s looking towards the shattered pieces of his heart lying all around ( ... )

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