Blooming

Mar 24, 2010 17:30

Title: Blooming
Rating: PG16?
Genre: Angst
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key ; broken!Onew/Key
Summary: Kibum didn't call it cheating the first time it happened.
Disclaimer: I wish.
a/n: idk how this turned into an angst fic. it was supposed to be a songfic based on 24-25 by kings of convenience, but yeahhh. that didn't happen. sorry, you-know-who. ;___;

Kibum didn't call it cheating the first time it happened. )

genre:angst, pairing: onew/key, the great fail begins, pairing: jonghyun/key, rating: pg16

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mayzeeacala March 25 2010, 06:19:47 UTC
It really makes me sad if its an broken onkey :(
maybe im being too stupid :D
this is freakin heartbreakin :( But beautiful at the same time :D
key ! choose who you want :( (choose jjong and leave onew to me!)
just kidding. :D
iloveyou!

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hanjongkey March 25 2010, 08:09:13 UTC
well, I feel bad for onew~ but yeah! Key only belong to JongHyun! so... you better end up with minho or taeminnie!xxP.. LOVE THIS ANYWAY! hho.. thanks for sharing!^^

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aishi07 March 25 2010, 08:10:20 UTC
heartbreaking at first, but i liked it. the ending was sweet. :) no wait, i didnt like it. i loved it. :D

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joya_infinita March 25 2010, 10:03:12 UTC
I really like it. we don't see much interaction between Kibum and Jinki, per se. but we can easily imagine the strain and tension in their relationship. and the impact of it all on Kibum's feelings and reactions. he takes it out on Jonghyun, but can't leave him at the same time.

thank you.
please, write more.

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salted_taiyaki March 25 2010, 10:23:16 UTC
HURK noooo
spot spot spot ;____; oh my god i hate school

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salted_taiyaki March 25 2010, 10:33:20 UTC
oh god how i have been waiting
I almost started singing 24-25 while reading this. almost. but i can't multitask and my voice's shot in the mornings. OTL

aaaanyway oh god this was so bittersweet ;A; poor Jinki. I mean, he wasn't even present in the story, but you could kind of feel that he was. like, in kibum's words and actions -- with the exception of some, where he'd just like throw everything away -- and lsj that ghosting conscience made it all the better ♥

it seemed much like a scene from a movie. that "we should stop" line. i dunno, i think it really fits kibum's character, and jonghyun's response ohhh i loved it.
may was probably my favorite month. i don't know *___* the fact that it lasted that long lksdf just goes to show that you kept in mind the fact that kibum's supposed to love jinki and
bah
this made my morning. it was so nice, especially the nearly wordless last month ♥ fff. thank you for sharing !

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m00bs March 26 2010, 01:01:59 UTC
you're the one that got me to write this. and now you're totally inflating my ego. ♥♥♥

i was worried this wouldn't match the lyrics and turn out bad. ;___; glad you liked it.

24-25 is such a jewel. ♥♥

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salted_taiyaki March 26 2010, 01:13:52 UTC
hum hum and i'm not regretting it a bit ♥

ah pish posh if you didn't mean for it to be based off of 24-25, it would've been beautiful either way ha ha.

indeed. they're just. idek. yeah.

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