the scene descrip that i promised...heh

[m3rcury]

i'm not even going to edit this. it's just going to be straight from my notebook. (*----> denotes a page change in it's original form.)
starting....

12 to 18 yr olds...
too much...i'm too old for
this crap...stretched ears,
converse and multiple torn layers
tiny girls w/big sexual
ambition...unable to back it
up...those that think oral
is nothing, when it's a bit
too personal...
although the music isn't new...
this phenom that is hardcore
"dancing"...is a new concept w/
me.
and it makes me laugh
flailing, twisting, windmilling...
they'd be ravers if they only
had glowsticks & it were darker
motojackets and belts with
adornments
and all of them w/ that
fucking hair...goddammit
nice when the roof of the
venue breaks...off in large
chunks
i just happened to be the
69th person...
and they wrote it on my hand
things have gotten much more
violent
virulent
straight edge ------>
i'm kind of glad that it is,
cos every show i used to
go to was full of every
psychadelic and narcotic
known to man...
i think i'll need to start
hardcore "dancing." it seems
to keep the youngins fit.
and pumas everywhere

some dumbass decided
to light some paper on fire...
you can't even breathe in here
now