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m3ssyjesi

Too Late To Fly

Dec 04, 2006 19:20

Title: Too Late To Fly

Chapter: One

Date: December 4, 2006

Summary: Here's the story of Emma Hawkins, the girl who is more commonly referred to as 'Claire's sister'. When you're forever living in the shadow of your sister, there has to be someway to step out, right?

Notes: So, I was listening to music today and suddenly felt like writing. Why, I ( Read more... )

short story

Comments 9

thenamesjes December 5 2006, 00:53:56 UTC

omg! I love ittt!!! amazingnesss! i wish i could write as well as you can! =)

m3ssyjesi December 5 2006, 01:19:12 UTC

Haha, really? You liked it? ^^ That's good then... haha, makes one of us xD
And you can write as well if not better! :]
I can't say I'm entirely sure if I will leave this piece alone though. I don't think I really developed Emma or Chris's characters well at all. But... then again... it's a short story. Aack. Haha.

What do you think?

And is the extreme clichedness okay? haha. I was feeling like an idiot the whole time I wrote it, haha. I kept going, 'is this believeable?' xD

thenamesjes December 5 2006, 01:23:10 UTC

Yes, The clichedness totally works for this story. Its just that type of story. I really love it. Maybe I'm just a sucker for romance. xD hahaha.

breakdownx3 December 5 2006, 01:38:32 UTC

Amazing.
I wish kissing was actually like that. Haha!
But it was a good story. :)
*thumbs up* Major kudos my friend!

m3ssyjesi December 5 2006, 21:07:23 UTC

Haha, I wish so too. *rolls eyes* hahaha.

sunlitstar December 5 2006, 04:36:35 UTC

This was beautifully written and very creative, and I loved reading every second of it. =)

m3ssyjesi December 5 2006, 20:51:23 UTC

Aw, thank yo so much ^^
Random inspiration seems to provide the best material for writing sometimes, lol.

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m3ssyjesi December 7 2006, 19:48:53 UTC

=D Yep, I write, haha, randomly and all the time. ^^ I'm one of those random people who get joy from a blank notebook and pen. xD

I have personally never really have been the unseen sibling. I wish I was sometimes, just to shift attention off, but being oldest, everyone expects the best from you. *sigh* And I kind of wanted to show in the story that you can get shadowed by someone younger than you. *shrugs*

Random inspiration rocks, lol. Thank you for reading it! :D

smiley_miley10 December 10 2006, 23:04:03 UTC

Wow! That was really good! I totally loved how the story progressed. C ya later!