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m_l_frost

Owned Part Seven

May 14, 2007 01:43

They all slept in the next morning, their bodies subconsciously aware that this was a rare day off and it was time to recharge the batteries.

Brendon woke up first in his own bunk where Ryan had tucked him before he and Spencer had indulged in one of their late night life-the-universe-and-everything conversations, which had gone on until the ( Read more... )

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crab_apple_kid May 14 2007, 02:49:14 UTC

this chapter was incredible, brendon's so funny:]
i laughed so hard at this line,
"Brendon turned around, the most ridiculous grin on his face, fighting the urge to run in slow motion along the corridor calling ’Ryyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaan!’ and flinging himself at the boy like he was on Baywatch."
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crazy_x_deppie May 14 2007, 03:15:23 UTC

FC?

crazy_x_deppie May 14 2007, 03:24:15 UTC

DAMN. Oh well. I love this story. <3 Nice update, you rock my sox. xD Ily.
♥
This was such an awesome chap. I got so hyped up that my family thought I had lost it. xD I fell out of my chair laughing hysterically. xD
<3

sullenriot19 May 14 2007, 04:57:01 UTC

I love this story. So much. I'm pretty sure Ryan and Brendon should have sex soon, though. Seriously.

The leash comment here...golden. Ryan couldn't have planned a better line.

*As a side note, I'd like to comment how much I love that you have them rolling joints instead of smoking out of a bowl. Most people seem to prefer bowls for some reason...I don't know why, though. Oh damn, I just inadvertently admitted to taking part in what some might consider an "illegal activity." Oh well.

Nicely written. Can't wait for the next one.

happythree May 14 2007, 16:57:19 UTC

*As a side note, I'd like to comment how much I love that you have them rolling joints instead of smoking out of a bowl. Most people seem to prefer bowls for some reason...I don't know why, though.

Agreed. My friend once burnt off half her eyelashes with a bowl, so I say that's why I don't use one haha

damnpetewentz May 14 2007, 05:03:01 UTC

the leash line was fucking hilarious...this whole chapter was though with them getting high alogn with Jon's ipod.

jwalkontherocks May 14 2007, 05:07:33 UTC

I come home and there's not only one but two new chapters up...fucking makes my night.

Aw this chapter was cute, no kink but it still fits.
I would admire someone if they had the patience to smoke only joints. I'm waaay too lazy for that shit, lol.

Can't wait for the next update. I feel like things might escalate (aka lots of kinky sex?? yeah??).