Owned Part Eleven

[m_l_frost]

They woke up together the next morning, arms wrapped around each other, their tiny bodies barely taking up a quarter of the large hotel bed.  They kissed passionately and ground against one another until Ryan forced himself to jump up out of bed and head to the shower before his lust overcame his control.

Ryan was all about control.  He

Comments

[frameitup]

Fucking hell!
Marry me!

[m_l_frost]

Okay.

[frameitup]

yay!

[itsallhushhush]

Wow, that was intense! But again, amazing. I don't know how you do it, keeping things interesting, but you do!

I don't really know what to say about this part, except that I think you are amazing and an amazing writer!

The only thing I don't get is why Brendon came back and seemed to be so upset?

[m_l_frost]

All will be revealed my friend...Brendon just needed a good hard beating before he opened up. Fair enough really ;)

Thanks for commenting again. You are lovely xxx

[secondstar05]

:( What's wrong with Brendon?

...I'm a little freaked out by whatever part of me it is that loves this story so much, by the way.

[m_l_frost]

Don't be freaked out...c'est naturelle. Embrace and enjoy. xxx

[bleeding_misery]

you can turn me the fuck on and melt my heart all in one little chapter.

[m_l_frost]

It's a gift :)

[lotrnhp4eva]

I love how this chapter is sexual and kinky and such, but it is still their relationship and intimacy and the intensity of their need for each other on a mental level that is the prominent thing here. I love it and I seriously hope you'll be updating soon :)