Owned Part Eleven

[m_l_frost]

They woke up together the next morning, arms wrapped around each other, their tiny bodies barely taking up a quarter of the large hotel bed.  They kissed passionately and ground against one another until Ryan forced himself to jump up out of bed and head to the shower before his lust overcame his control.

Ryan was all about control.  He

Comments

[sullenriot19]

This. This may be your best chapter yet. You, my dear, had me in tears when Brendon came rushing in begging for his collar. And the funny thing is, I was thinking of leaving you a suggestion in the next comment about having Brendon ask for his collar, and here you wrote it already! I think you must be able to read minds. This chapter was so sad and beautiful. I think you did a wonderful job illustrating how very much a submissive needs their Dominant, and vice versa. You know I already loved you. I'm pretty sure this made me love you that much more.

[darkemptyheart]

This part is simply amazing. I love how Ryan is subconsciously taking on the duties of a Dom and not even realizing it. Sure it may seem submissive to him, but he's merely giving into his instinct to take care of Brendon, his submissive.

Then Brendon coming back and needing, no, craving Ryan's dominance is great. I love how they talked about before hand what Brendon wants and Ryan knew to give it to him.

Once again, I'm impressed and in love with how you portray the complexity of their relationship and the power exchange. I like seeing how their D/S relationship seeps into real life, because after all that's apart of who they are and a big part of their relationship.

This is so embarrassing...but, I love you :) You're awesome. *blushes* Okay, I'm done gushing now.

[biters_block]

Fuuuck

I wonder what's wrong with Brendon

I love this

[neechan_chana]

Fluff and sex in the same chapter, this is what I love best lol
The last part was fucking intense ! I really want to know what upset Brendon so much !

[jwalkontherocks]

Hmm could Brendon possibly be upset because his parents are fucktards?

I always get real nervous when the intensity dies down and they think the BDSM stuff is over but of course that's not the case! You just like making me all nervous :)

This chapter probably turned me on more than it should've but I'm okay with that :)