Owned Part 13

Jun 14, 2007 18:01


“You know, we can’t see much when you’ve got your back to us, Urie,” said Pete.

Brendon blushed again and slowly turned around, replacing his hands in front of his rapidly appearing hard-on and hoping that this wouldn’t be regarded as disobedience.

“Aww, look Ryan!  He’s shy!” exclaimed Pete.

“Hands behind your head,” barked Ryan, and Brendon’s ( Read more... )

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sullenriot19 June 14 2007, 20:34:50 UTC
Oh man...I'm so glad I caught this as soon as you posted.

This is certainly one of your more intense chapters. Wow. Your Brendon's so adorable and your Pete's kind of creepy (but I love it). Great job. Really. I always look forward to this story.

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darkemptyheart June 14 2007, 21:14:47 UTC
This is awesome. I like Pete being an inactive participant in Brendon's humilation, but playing a part nonetheless and Ryan was just perfect.

This part was nowhere near shit. And believe me, I know how life takes a hold of you and won't let go. So no pressure from me there. I'm glad I could help a bit smiles :)

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damnpetewentz June 14 2007, 21:16:06 UTC
I was surprised pete kept it undercontrol. hes a little whore too :)
this was great. I've missed it :)

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therecordskipsx June 14 2007, 22:31:33 UTC
i still really think that this is the best story ever.

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xshadowxdodgerx June 14 2007, 23:51:56 UTC
Okay, first I've got to say that over the last hour-ish I've read the entire fic, so I'm a little overwhelmed by all the intense hotness of it all, having quite a time reviewing.

That was amazing.

I loved how slow things have progressed through this.

This chapter was really amazing, a perfect aftermath to the events of before. Will be following this faithfully from here out.

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