Trust Everyone, But Cut the Cards

Dec 04, 2015 20:24



SHE WOULD NEVER BETRAY ME ( Read more... )

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halfshellvenus December 6 2015, 07:45:14 UTC
Paranoid is right. I get the sense this is all happening inside Jacob's head, where he is at war with himself over believing that he has been/will be betrayed. It escalates as it goes on, and surely it must blow soon, one way or another.

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lordrexfear December 7 2015, 00:04:35 UTC
He did it... or he killed himself and the other person and kept her alive. It could be any of this or none of it. I actually love that I don't know.

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roina_arwen December 7 2015, 07:04:22 UTC
Intriguing!

As regards this, in the topic thread: 70332 seasons of idol and I still don't remember how to change my link name.

You type (using the less than and greater than instead of the square brackets): [a href="Your link here"]What you want it to say[/a]

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eternal_ot December 9 2015, 11:23:21 UTC
Thanks for the info..:) <3 will try it next time.

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tonithegreat December 8 2015, 15:58:16 UTC
Me, I think he's still pondering his options, though I wonder if the font change means he isn't the only one in control for himself.

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sinnamongirl December 8 2015, 19:41:57 UTC
I like how you didn't take the prompt super-literally (I had a really hard time *not* writing a straight card-dealing story myself), and yet get the exact same gist of not trusting people through. Good job!

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