Paranoid is right. I get the sense this is all happening inside Jacob's head, where he is at war with himself over believing that he has been/will be betrayed. It escalates as it goes on, and surely it must blow soon, one way or another.
I like how you didn't take the prompt super-literally (I had a really hard time *not* writing a straight card-dealing story myself), and yet get the exact same gist of not trusting people through. Good job!
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As regards this, in the topic thread: 70332 seasons of idol and I still don't remember how to change my link name.
You type (using the less than and greater than instead of the square brackets): [a href="Your link here"]What you want it to say[/a]
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