Spoons

[m_malcontent]

They never gave “H” a welcome home party, but it is back.  Had to be with all of the suburban kids reaching into mommy’s medicine cabinet to get barred out on Xanax and, more lethally, high on Oxy.  First you pop a couple, then a handful, then a heaping handful.  Then you grind and snort, then you shoot and those little pills cost 5 bucks a piece

Comments

[alycewilson]

Whoa! Quite the twist!

[tjoel2]

Powerful ending. Very nice!

[rejeneration]

Maybe she is doing it anyway, more power to her.

This line made me laugh. As always, darlin', your sardonic turns tear my head every which way. I love your lavish style. It instantly excites. Another observation, and I hope you forgive me, but there is such a "youthful" vibe to this! I love it!

Jacob is my boy and all, but it is a real drag having to keep a schedule 1 drug around to keep his girlfriend from blowing the neighborhood.

A LOL again!

And what a GREAT ending! Bravo! =D =D =D

[tijuanagringo]

Good use of first person, personal narrator; consistently voiced all the way through, from beginning to end. Solid characterization and description. Fast paced, with a constant feeling of desperation and need. Excellent twist at the end.

[rayaso]

I really enjoyed the narration with its speed and the ending. I did not see Yosemite Sam coming, but then I never do. Good job!