Comments | m_malcontent: That One Friend

m_malcontent

Dec 01, 2016 08:53

Beneath my roof, find rest ( Read more... )

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penpusher December 1 2016, 17:24:52 UTC

Sneakily devastating. Just great.

aniron_iorhael December 2 2016, 09:24:09 UTC

A hurtful truth, to be sure. Beautifully said. Wisdom can't be gained any other way.

emp_sheeptopia December 3 2016, 18:00:21 UTC

Wow. Beautiful and heartbreaking.

rayaso December 3 2016, 23:41:28 UTC

I did not see the ending stanzas -- well done! There were some good, evocative phrases. I especially liked your opening.

lilmissmagic71 December 4 2016, 16:30:46 UTC

wow. LOVE this.