LJ Idol Week 12- The Blue Room

[m_malcontent]

We sell discretion, boy

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Interesting! Love your word choice(s).

[rayaso]

Very creepy, and nicely done, especially "Remember that I know where your son goes to Elementary school." A place like the Blue Room would be scary.

[halfshellvenus]

What a dark, fascinating place! Clients pay well, but they have as many valuable secrets to exploit as the Blue Room and the people who run it. It's mutually-assured destruction.

Very occasionally you will think you see a corpse
You do not
You will call me immediately
Yikes. But it totally fits the tone of this piece.

[mamas_minion]

Delightful and menacing.

[eternal_ot]

Amazing take! Good Job.