LJ Idol Week 14- Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here

[m_malcontent]

Good morning, maggots, I trust you rested well.  I am Seargeant Aemon Hamner.  Did any of you pretty, pretty puffcakes see the sign above the door.  Do any of you maggots recognize the inscription.

That's right Dante's Inferno, a literate maggot.  You'll be on a transport home in a week.  Oh not just literate maggots, illiterate maggots, multi

Comments

[d0gs]

i read this entire thing in sgt.hartman's voice from full metal jacket!

[m_malcontent]

I sort of wrote it with his voice in my head.  Thanks.

[d0gs]

you did an awesome job with it! :D

[rayaso]

What a great speach! I can see Clint Eastwood giving it. I enjoyed the very end, and the great twist. It would be a very effective way of letting the maggots know what they were in for as Greenbottles.

[mamas_minion]

This was great. I definitely heard R. Lee Ermery's voice when I read this. I also pictured him giving it in a Heinlin-esque world of war.

[bleodswean]

Haha!! This is totally inspiring! You should record it!

[eternal_ot]

I agree. This needs to be dubbed :)

[dmousey]

Maggots!!! HeeHee! Good read! Hugs and peace~~~