LJ Idol Week 2- Living rent free in your head

Oct 03, 2019 21:04

I have seen through your eyes things no man should see ( Read more... )

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halfshellvenus October 8 2019, 20:02:46 UTC
Been held in the loving arms of sedation in your dual diagnosis unit
I'm not even entirely sure what that might mean, but I love the richness of what it suggests.

I have convinced you, that you sail your ship alone
A leaky vessel, but your own
This could be about anyone's demons, but the line about 'bottles brown' tells me more.

It is such a battle, and right now the alcoholism is still winning. But it also lies about what could be true and about your own potential. ♥

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dmousey October 10 2019, 23:03:58 UTC
i love these words...🌻🔥✌🐁🎃

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rayaso October 8 2019, 20:11:31 UTC
This is a wonderful poem. I especially liked the concluding stanza -- very well done!

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shay_writes October 8 2019, 23:36:29 UTC
I enjoyed reading this.

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uselesstinrelic October 9 2019, 02:42:33 UTC
This leaves me uneasy. I don't know how to read it and I'm torn between wanting to understand it and thinking it's probably better if I don't. I can't tell how the person from the perspective of the poem feels. Other than 'a lot'. I enjoyed, thanks. There's some people this round trying to get me to change my mind about poetry being not for me, dang.

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karmasoup October 9 2019, 23:01:11 UTC
Wow. Naturally - obvious, but perfect. Brilliant.

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