Lj Idol Week 9- Blood Harmony

[m_malcontent]

The methodology was a mix of the traditional and the new. The blood, pain and symbology as old as time itself. But the simultaniously working tattoo artists and the hallucinogen spiked plum wine was different, but how am even I gonna find peyote in the city. Anyway, if the ritual didn't work, my sister would know...and somebody wouldn't get paid

Comments

[rayaso]

This was a fascinating style and very wild. It had a nice experimental feel to it.

[bleodswean]

WOWOWOW!!!! You NEED a graphic illustrator NOW. This is so visual and soooooooooooooooo well done!

[tsuki_no_bara]

this is disjointed and confusing but it reads as if it has a full world behind it. i could only half follow it but it sucked me right in. it's definitely a different take on the prompt, and overall i really enjoyed it.

[halfshellvenus]

Fun use of the prompt, and a neat fictional turn as well. :D

caused my meat body to break the arm off a chair,
"Meat body" made me crack right up.

Both the style and the story itself were an entertaining and refreshing read. :)

[static_abyss]

I love your main charcater and also the genre you choose. You write action really well and your descriptions make it so easy to imagine what's going on. Great piece!