LJ Idol Week 15- Busman's Holiday

[m_malcontent]

300 from the left wing
300 from the right wing
300 top of the key
300 right corner 3's
300 left corner 3's

First day his new stepdaddy moved in. He beat the living shit out Rodderrick, make sure the young baller didn't get any wrong ideas about who the man of the house was. Mom was too high to care.

Free school breakfast

Comments

[favoritebean]

Wow. This is so raw. I'm at a loss for words.

[adoptedwriter]

Wow! A huge story in so few words!

[d0gs]

I absolutely love how you can conjure such imagery and powerful emotion with a small amount of words! <3

[halfshellvenus]

What a terrific, vivid snapshot of someone whose perseverance (never a day off, never a vacation from the work) carried him through and beyond circumstances that could so easily have destroyed him.

[roina_arwen]

This was very well written and thoughtful.