ENG - [YabuxInoo] - Merry-Go-Round Goes 4(b) - Rejection

[ma_rendezvous]

Title : Merry-Go-Round Goes
Chapter : 4(b)/8
Pairing(s)/Fandom : Yabu Kota x Inoo Kei / Hey! Say! JUMP, NEWS, Kisumai, more to come
Author : ma_rendezvous
Genre : AU. Romance
Rating : NC-17
Warning : Explicit content. Dirty words. Slight mention of use of drugs. A paraphrased version of Pretty Woman (1991)
Disclaimer : The main story belongs to Garry Marshall's

Comments

[ladydalatis]

Even your writing doesn't sound good, you know :/ Get plenty rest and take care yourself more~

but the piano scene is just *INSERTALLTHEFEELINGSHERE* Been witing for that scene ever since this ff starts <3

[ma_rendezvous]

REALLY?? WAS IT SERIOUSLY BAD AF? Please tell me then pls pls I'll withdraw this post asap and fix it (;;;;;A;;;;;) *ojrok2 bucho*

But thank you for your concern (;;w;;)

[ladydalatis]

just some typos and ambiguity, but it's rare thing since it's you so...

[ma_rendezvous]

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[mbee0805]

This fic official become number 1 inoobu fic i favour so far ^^
The dinner just yeah scary and i feel bad for yabu there
But there's this piano scene that just lovely, and i just love the way yabu try to kiss kei twice but got rejected that took the best part of all ~ <3
And I really love all that piano pieces, beautiful :)
Cant wait for the next chapter :)
Can i add you? :)

Are you okay? Is It bad?
Im sorry to hear that~
Get well soon and take caree ne~ ^^

And thank you for the fic :D

[ma_rendezvous]

thank you very much... I'm really happy to hear that! (;;w;;)
let me hug you~ *hug *hug

of course you can, I'll be very happy to have you as a friend! <3
please add me~ X))
and let's talk sometime ~

pretty bad, haha...
but I'm okay now. at least the painkiller makes me feel okay XDD
thank you very much for your concern ;;w;;

thank you for reading and commenting! <33

[mbee0805]

Hug you back, tight~ :)
I've added you and currently reading some of your fic right now XD
And me too happy to have a friend like you ^^
Once again get well soon nee~

[ma_rendezvous]

Thank you! I've added you back <3
well... douzo... but my fanfics aren't that good srsly (;;w;;)

Thank you! I'll take care of myself a little more TwT

[ficreader_02]

Gosh you cut the making out part! It's such a cliffhanger!

Anyways, are you fine now? I hope your doing good now... You're in that situation when you wrote this? You're still great for that!

[ma_rendezvous]

I'm sorry, I didn't want to cut it like that at first but then I wanted to make a sexy - literacy - making out scene.. did it work? XDDD

yeah, this fic is made during my utmost stress... and I still feel like shit to be honest... XDDD

but thank you for reading! I love your comment <333

[juju905rote]

We finally meet Hikaru! His family really is something.
I feel bad for the Yaotomes, but why is it......Hikaru is very cool but I feel a little bit annoyed at him :"
Yabu might seem like a heartless capitalist, but he didn't choose to be born into his family...

Lol at the part about Hikaru's crooked teeth. But I like his teeth x)
And innocent Inoo, wondering where the white rice is, so cuteee!
All the tension between Yabu and Hikaru made me hold my breath. And when Yabu left the penthouse, and Inoo was left alone, it hurt :"
And...the last scene with the piano, so romantic!
Thank you for the update!

[ma_rendezvous]

truth to be told, I'm very happy to hear that XDD

anyways, why annoyed? could you tell me? I wanna know XDD

Yeah, Hikaru has the best crooked teeth in the world maybe? XDD
but I agreed with Inoo, like his family is (depicted) rich with all their awesomeness but his teeth are sort of..... well....? XD

thank you for dropping by and commenting, beni <333

[juju905rote]

Yes, the Yaotomes were so cool. Hikaru...I feel he was a bit judgemental, like he's looking down on nouveau riche cpaitalist guys, although his reaction is understandable x)
But he's like...my niban so I love him anyways :")

Yes, I feel like Hikaru's teeth are kind of a paradox to his rich character, but I hope he keeps them crooked x) that's very cool.

Anyways I talked too much about Hikaru here x). But I love all of this fic ♥

[ma_rendezvous]

is okay! I'm very happy to hear that really! XDD
especially the part when he's being some kind of annoying in a tolerable way... I mean I don't bias Hikaru but I kind of have this tendency to be too subjective towards his characters in any of my fanfics... that's why I'm happy my effort doesn't go to waste XDDD

that teeth will stay sonomama until he changes it himself in real life, in which I wish would never happen, because it's what makes Hikaru... well, Hikaru XDD

thank you againnnnn ilu <3 <3

[shin_ju8]

Nee, are you alright? Be careful next time, okay :|||

Kaciann inoo, ga ngerti apa2 hrus ngedengerin percakapan kyk gitu.. tapi inoo unyu bangettt. Sok lah main aja mending ke rumahku, inoo aku suguhin nasi satu rice cooker buat dia sendirian nanti XDDD enak loh nasi di sini, pulen dan putih, mulus(?) kayak inoo :3

Sumpahhhhh entah kenapa benchhhiii sama Yabu yang nyuekin inoo. Benci, benci, gatau kenapa benci :'''

Take some rest okay, don't force yourself ._.
I'll be waiting the next chapter ^^

[ma_rendezvous]

not that alright, but I'm healing XDD
(except that the stess is still there)

kasian yeh, ngga dapet nasi hahahaha asa kampung gitu XDD *dihajar*

Yabu nyuekin Inoo tapi kemudian Inoo nolak dia mentah2 XDDD
karmaaaa hahahahahahaha XDDD

I will, thank you for your concern, boku :""3
okay! please look forward to it <333 *blow kiss*