ENG - [YabuxInoo] - Merry-Go-Round Goes 4(b) - Rejection

[ma_rendezvous]

Title : Merry-Go-Round Goes
Chapter : 4(b)/8
Pairing(s)/Fandom : Yabu Kota x Inoo Kei / Hey! Say! JUMP, NEWS, Kisumai, more to come
Author : ma_rendezvous
Genre : AU. Romance
Rating : NC-17
Warning : Explicit content. Dirty words. Slight mention of use of drugs. A paraphrased version of Pretty Woman (1991)
Disclaimer : The main story belongs to Garry Marshall's

Comments

[singchronight0]

Are you ok?
Becareful, don't involve yourself in stupid accident again :)

'Who the hell is Yuta?'
Woooow! Yabu is getting jealous?

Inoo is really pretty badass!
He wondered how it would be if he had sex with Hikaru!
Then do it!
His existence enlightened the tensed atmosphere between Yabu and Yaotomes a bit xD

Grand father Yaotome was kind, when Inoo asked Yabu if he could take photos of food, the grand father Yaotome didn't look down nor make Inoo feel embarass.

Hikaru was coooool!
When he said f-word to Yabu xD
I thought he met his match!

“Where’s the rice?” Inoo asked, whispering this time. But in fact Hikaru was still able to hear him that the young brunette turned his gaze towards him and watched him in silence.
What was Hikaru thinking at that moment?

I support Yaotomes to protect their company from capitalists, but I don't want to see Yabu's failure either ;_;

Inoo was cute, so.cute like a kitten ;_;

The scene Yabu was trying to kiss Inoo's lips twice but got rejected ;_; OMG ;_;

But Inoo was still staring at him,

[ma_rendezvous]

I SO LOVE YOUR COMMENT I THINK I'M GONNA CRY (;;w;;)
I love it that you see through and not miss the small things between the lines! Not many recognizes these trivias like you do, and I feel really appreciated (TwT) *hug real tight*

To sum it up, the forth chapter is all about rejection...
When Inoo was rejected by the shop he visited, Yabu who rejected his building sympathy towards the Yaotomes, when the Yaotomes rejected to be bought by Yabu's corporate raid, again when Yabu rejected Inoo's offer, and when Inoo rejected Yabu's kiss... so yeah, basically everything hurts X""""D

I'm not gonna reply much further right now or else I would spoil everything... so please bear a little while until all the clouds and mists get a little clearer (or even thicker?) XDD

Can I ask something? It's a stupid question but I wonder... In whose side are you in, if you could choose? XDD

And thank you for your concern (;;w;;)
I'm doing good!

[singchronight0]

It's good to hear that you're doing good :)

Ok, I got it! That's why thins chapter named 'rejected'. Because all of them got rejected.
Great! :)

[Spoiler (click to open)]Can I ask something? It's a stupid question but I wonder... In whose side are you in, if you could choose? XDD
You know well that it's hard to choose lol
I think I'm in Yabu's side xD
I love both Yabu and Hikaru, but the businessman Yabu Kota who wearing jetblack Armani suit,with unreadable smile, is irresistible.Because of his character, his life almost looks perfect, living in New York, as the heir of the Yabu, his future should be bright, but I feel it's dark somehow

[m0echan]

mau spot juga ketinggalan...
yg komen udah banyak X'D

yowislah. spot dulu. masih ada kerjaan....

/brb/

[ma_rendezvous]

spot taken XDDDDD
tapapa dhe, take your time, come back anytime <33

[siklomika]

Have I said that I love you? ;u;
Why do I want Hikaru to be Yabu's rival in love too lol
The dinner part was so intense but the piano scene is toooo beautifuuuuul ;;;u;;; I swear I could imagine what Yabu saw and it was so pretty!

Btw, ganbatte for your study! And take care of your health!
Waiting for the next cahepter :)

[ma_rendezvous]

Thank you!! I love you too <333 ;;w;;

It's going to be revealed in the fifth chapter, so please kindly check it out <33333

and thank you very much for your concern! I'm fine now X33