ENG - [YabuxInoo] - Merry-Go-Round Goes 5(a) - The Whirlabout

[ma_rendezvous]

Title : Merry-Go-Round Goes
Chapter : 5(a)/8
Pairing(s)/Fandom : Yabu Kota x Inoo Kei / Hey! Say! JUMP, NEWS, Kisumai, more to come
Author : ma_rendezvous
Genre : AU. Romance
Rating : mostly NC-17
Warning : Explicit content. Dirty words. Slight mention of use of drugs. A paraphrased version of Pretty Woman (1991)
Disclaimer : The main story belongs to Garry

Comments

[juju905rote]

Ahhhh update!
This is so sweet ;_; I'm melting. I love their morning moments.
And also when Yabu got mad that Inoo got treated badly, he was so cool! And he took Inoo shopping -- I want that to happen to me too ;_;
And his caringness to Inoo overall makes me mushy

Oh and Hikaru appeared again :) Will he develop feelings for Kei? x)
I bet Yabu will be so mad when he finds out the two of them skipped together. But I like the contrast between Yabu and Hikaru, and how Hikanoo bond and understand each other in a different way xD
(I can't wait to see Yabu's jealous reaction)

Oh and Kitayama is suspicious ;_; I feel suspicious of him ;_;
Thanks for updating

[ma_rendezvous]

you're so fast!! I saw your comment while I was still editing here and there and I felt so happy but then I got something else to do (;;;;w;;;;)
ilu beni <333

yea they're so sweet but bitter at the same tiiiiiiiime I feel like punching them on the face with my own fist (TTwTT)
and I wish I were taken to shopping like that too!! (TwT)

Hikaru is one important character, his presence should be real strong, but I dunno whether I made it or not hahaha. did I fail?
about Hikaru developing feeling for Inoo...
well... probably yes, probably not? let's see how it turns out later XD

thanks for reading!

[ladydalatis]

The only reason I am not first this time because I read it thrice!

ANYWAY!

IT'S SO SWEET AND FLUFFY AND I'M GONNA DIEEEEEEE WHYYYYYYYY Really love the morning scene and all the narration of Inoo's jumbled feeling and all the sweet things Yabu said to Inoo and last part when Hikaru comes just ALLTHEFEELINNGGGGGSSSHEEERRRREEEE

Shit, I really wish Hikaru/Inoo could close the story but we all know it wouldn't happen. Ever. Which kind of sad.

[ma_rendezvous]

Oh Buchou I feel honored (;;;;w;;;;)

I knoooowwwww riiiigghhhttt all the feelings that make me want to punch them all straight on the face aaaaaaarrrghhh and the fact that my heart screams for Inoo to just be with Hikaru because part of my brain believes that's the best ending evur is so dejecting like whuuuutttt

anyways BUCHOU I LOVE YOU ALWAYSSSS <3333 *tjium*

[mbee0805]

This is sweet their morning momment just love~
yabu has his own way to show how he care so i cant blame him XD
but inooooo whyyyy whyyyyy hika is suspicous, yuta toooo
I want moarrrrrrr
Thanks for the fic ^^
I'll be waiting :D

[ma_rendezvous]

yea yabu is sweet and he has his own way to protect someone he cares about but then he's too selfish X""DD *spreading yabu hate* *kicked*

I know right, either yuta or hikaru, even kitayama they're all suspicious af OTL OTL

there will be more, so please be patient for a little longer!
and thank you very much for reading!!! i love you and your comments <3333

[m0echan]

do I have to stock a pack of tissue for the next chap?

dah rasa2'y mah bakalan butuh X"D

[ma_rendezvous]

rasanya ngga perlu dhe, da aku mah payah bikin adegan angst asa suka gagal X"""DDDDD

makasi uda bacaaaaa <33333

[singchronight0]

I'll.be.back to comment later.
Thank you for update ;_;

[singchronight0]

I like the first paragraph of this part!
It seems I’m a ghost haunted inside Yabu’s penthouse and I can watch and hear what Inoo is thinking in his mind.

And that’s why Inoo had sadness in his eyes when Yabu was trying to kiss him ;_;
Yabu and Inoo’s status is opposite too much ;_;

He didn’t want to let himself fall miserable under Yabu’s momentary affection. He didn’t want to hurt himself by having personal emotion towards Yabu
;_;

Sighing, Inoo buried his face on his arms. Until the morning sunlight turned more blinding than before, he stayed still in deep confusion, ended up barely sleeping at all.
Inoo fell for Yabu already ;_;

Yabu smiled to himself as he reached out his hands, circling them perfectly around Inoo’s slim waist that the hooker half jolted in surprise by his sudden and unexpected act. The tall brunette then buried his face on Inoo’s back, hugging him tighterBest scene! ;_; Sweeeeet and warm (but hurt somehow) ;_

[ma_rendezvous]

yea that's why Inoo feels sad, because probably he's been in love with Yabu and vice versa, but then again they thought they just couldn't go beyond AND it's somehow frustrating af TwT

YUTA!! Yuta said Yabu's like a robot XDDD he's kind of breaking a hotel's ethic code but maybe he did that because Inoo was being OBNOXIOUSLY irresistable and/or maybe because Yuta doesn't like Inoo kept blabbering about Yabu or something HAHA XDDDD that... is just in my imagination, not even mentioned in the fanfic itself lololol XDDDD

[singchronight0]

Thank you I know you love me as same as I love you, mutual feelings xoxo